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Brohers in arms

The Star Fox team was celebrating after defeating Andross once again. So they held a party at their home. It was going great and then Fox noticed someone who seems to be familier but he can't remember. Who could it be?



Chapter 1 - A family reunion
Submitted: October 4, 2006 • Updated: October 4, 2006
Word count: 1235 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 292


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RustyMagnum on January 8, 2009, 10:49:19 PM

RustyMagnum on (Chapter: index)
RustyMagnumI honestly do no hate this story or anything, but it is actually completelly unreadable. You should use actual letters instead of using numbers. Also, the story is writen very much into a same, endless line, so i cannot see when they speak or when you're just telling something. I am truly sorry, because this story may have some guts, but it is ruined by the lazines of the writer. You must get rid of that lazines.

DeathNinja919 on December 23, 2006, 6:12:45 AM

DeathNinja919 on (Chapter: 1)
DeathNinja919You should try using the actual letters -.-