Ugly
Submitted August 5, 2005 Updated August 5, 2005 Status Incomplete | One day, a young girl stood in front of the mirror and saw that she was ugly.
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Chapter 1 - Ugly
Submitted: August 5, 2005 • Updated: August 5, 2005
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Gaz on August 26, 2005, 12:19:14 AM
Gaz on (Chapter: 1)
Well, that is straight to the point. I like your opening sentence. lolTrinity_Fire on August 5, 2005, 12:03:32 AM
Trinity_Fire on (Chapter: 1)
awww, a small and sad piece. ^^- It's nice! And the way you go about it so different than other writers... I love your style! And it's funny how i find it so very true. XD
Loved the simplicity and the final two paragraphs were really nice. ^_^
Keep writing!