Chapter 1 - Listen
Submitted December 13, 2007 Updated December 13, 2007 Status Complete | This is another one of my poems. I've been feeling a little depressed lately and this poem will explain why. You can answer the question towards the end if you want to. I hope you enjoy it. It's also written in song form.
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Chapter 1 - Listen
Chapter 1 - Listen
Do you ever want to be heard?
Do you ever want someone to listen?
Do you ever think that there's someone out there who wants to be heard?
Do you think that there's someone out there who wants to listen?
Maybe I'm one of those people
Someone who strives to be heard, but never is
Someone who strives to be listened to, but only listens
Do you know someonw who wants to be heard?
Do you know someone who wants others to listen?
Do you know that feeling?
Do you understand?
Maybe I'm one of those people
Someone who strives to be heard, but never is
Someone who strives to be listened to, but only listens
I want my voice to be heard, but no one cares to listen
I have a voice too
But no one listens
Why do I try?
What's the point?
I'm asking
Will you listen?
Maybe I'm one of those people
Someone who strives to be heard, but never is
Someone who strives to be listened to, but only listens
Listen, a voice is calling....
Do you ever want someone to listen?
Do you ever think that there's someone out there who wants to be heard?
Do you think that there's someone out there who wants to listen?
Maybe I'm one of those people
Someone who strives to be heard, but never is
Someone who strives to be listened to, but only listens
Do you know someonw who wants to be heard?
Do you know someone who wants others to listen?
Do you know that feeling?
Do you understand?
Maybe I'm one of those people
Someone who strives to be heard, but never is
Someone who strives to be listened to, but only listens
I want my voice to be heard, but no one cares to listen
I have a voice too
But no one listens
Why do I try?
What's the point?
I'm asking
Will you listen?
Maybe I'm one of those people
Someone who strives to be heard, but never is
Someone who strives to be listened to, but only listens
Listen, a voice is calling....
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YamiRevea on December 14, 2007, 2:05:48 AM
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That's so sad yet very beautiful, I love it...you know I'm always here for you...even if I'm not physically there right? ^^ *hugs*KelekiahGaladrian on December 19, 2007, 6:35:05 AM
Thanks. It was meant to be sad, but beautiful, I didn't even think of that. I'm glad you're always there for me. ^^ You're an inspiration to me. Yeah, I wish you were here for me physically, but it can't be helped I suppose. I'm glad you liked it though. ^^YamiRevea on December 19, 2007, 8:12:52 AM
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^^YoriXYamiForever on December 13, 2007, 9:51:34 AM
Sad Kel-chan. (of course, I've already read it ^^)OF COURSE I'M HERE FOR YOU!!!!!!!! ^_^
KelekiahGaladrian on December 13, 2007, 9:52:58 AM
Yes, very sad, and depressing. (^^ *wink*)YAY! *glomps* THANKS YORI-CHAN! YOU ROCK!! ^^
YoriXYamiForever on December 13, 2007, 9:58:43 AM
^_^ ThanksKelekiahGaladrian on December 13, 2007, 9:59:12 AM
You're welcome! ^^bookworm369 on December 13, 2007, 9:43:20 AM
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wow great job i love the last line^^ and im always here to listen Kel-chan^^KelekiahGaladrian on December 13, 2007, 9:44:24 AM
Thanks JT-kun. If I ever need you, I won't hesitate to ask for it. Thanks for being there by the way. I really appreciate it. ^^bookworm369 on December 13, 2007, 9:48:49 AM
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thats what friends are for ^///^ *hugs*KelekiahGaladrian on December 13, 2007, 9:49:49 AM
^^ *hugs* Thanks.