Chapter 1 - Shining Star
Submitted December 24, 2007 Updated December 24, 2007 Status Complete | This is a poem I decided to write for my friend YamiRevea as a Christmas gift because she's one of the best friends I could ever have and I am unable to get her a physical gift. Hope you like it Jenny-chan!
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Chapter 1 - Shining Star
Chapter 1 - Shining Star
Hidden by clouds
You glow in the night
Hidden by the light of the rising sun
You shine as bright as can be
You're there when I need you
You light my way
You guide my path
You know exactly what I need when I need it
It may be a metaphor
It may not even be true
But still
You're my shining star
You glow in the night
Hidden by the light of the rising sun
You shine as bright as can be
You're there when I need you
You light my way
You guide my path
You know exactly what I need when I need it
It may be a metaphor
It may not even be true
But still
You're my shining star
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YoriXYamiForever on December 31, 2007, 7:26:25 AM
Awwwww! ^^ That's wonderful Kel-chan!! ^^ And it looks like Reshea really liked it!KelekiahGaladrian on December 31, 2007, 7:27:26 AM
Yeah, she did. She told me she printed it out and put it in one of her folders or something like that. Amazing huh? I'm glad you like it to though. ^^YamiRevea on December 26, 2007, 1:26:49 AM
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Oh my gosh Lego-chan....this is so beautiful, I love how you described the whole poem, it's so meaningful! I LOVE IT!!!! Your the greatest you know that? *Hugs*KelekiahGaladrian on December 29, 2007, 10:44:02 AM
^///^ Thanks Jenny-chan. I'm glad you liked it. ^///^ I actually didn't think it was that well written, but I'm glad you liked it anyway. ^///^YamiRevea on December 29, 2007, 12:47:07 PM
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Of course I like it! not only like it, I LOVE it. Your the greates Lego-chan!!! and it's the best gift I've gotten so far! ^^ *hugs*KelekiahGaladrian on December 31, 2007, 1:29:34 AM
^^ I'm really glad you love it Jenny-chan! It was written from the bottom of my heart. ^^ And it was just for you. ^^YamiRevea on December 31, 2007, 1:43:49 AM
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Yes!! ^^ thanks again Lego-chaaaannn!! *glomps*KelekiahGaladrian on December 31, 2007, 4:10:42 AM
You're welcome! ^^ *glomps*YamiRevea on December 31, 2007, 5:12:13 AM
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^^