Chapter 1 - Just Words
Submitted December 31, 2007 Updated December 31, 2007 Status Complete | This is just a poem I wrote while on vacation, nothing big. Hope you like it!
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Chapter 1 - Just Words
Chapter 1 - Just Words
It's a song yet a poem
A poem yet a song
There's no music
Just words in my head
What does it mean?
Why is it there?
Should I write it down?
Should I recite it?
It portrays so much emotion
Let it be heard
Let it be read
Read it
Say it
Write it
Sing it
It's a song yet a poem
A poem yet a song
There's no music
Just words in my head
A poem yet a song
There's no music
Just words in my head
What does it mean?
Why is it there?
Should I write it down?
Should I recite it?
It portrays so much emotion
Let it be heard
Let it be read
Read it
Say it
Write it
Sing it
It's a song yet a poem
A poem yet a song
There's no music
Just words in my head
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DeathNoteSurvivor on January 8, 2008, 2:36:29 PM
OMG THAT IS SO FREAKIN AWESOME!!!XDDDD ok i know ive never really liked any of my own stuff but this in my opinion is better than all mine put together! short yet beautiful^^ this is my new theme song.....poem....thing XDKelekiahGaladrian on January 9, 2008, 5:57:35 AM
Really? Wow, I didn't think it was that good. I'm going to have to disagree with that, because it's not that good. Well thank you, I'm extremely flattered. ^///^DeathNoteSurvivor on January 9, 2008, 9:28:53 PM
the thing ive noticed is often times the best ones are the ones that you think are bad XPKelekiahGaladrian on January 15, 2008, 6:31:04 AM
That's definitely true.YoriXYamiForever on December 31, 2007, 7:16:06 AM
Kool, sounds like a short song ^_^ Very nice, well done!!! ^^KelekiahGaladrian on December 31, 2007, 7:19:44 AM
Thanks Wulf-chan! ^^ This actually sprouted from writing Listen because it sounds like a song, but I couldn't hear the music, only the words. *shrugs* It was kinda interesting. ^^YamiRevea on December 31, 2007, 5:10:55 AM
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Wow...that's absolutely pretty, awesome job!! ^^KelekiahGaladrian on December 31, 2007, 5:11:26 AM
Thanks Jenny-chan! ^^YamiRevea on December 31, 2007, 5:13:19 AM
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welcome! ^^KelekiahGaladrian on December 31, 2007, 5:14:34 AM
^^