Chapter 1 - Time
Submitted December 31, 2007 Updated December 31, 2007 Status Complete | Another poem. I wrote it a long time ago, but I didn't know what to call it or what to do with it really, but now it's complete, and to me, it makes no sense at all whatsoever. Enjoy!
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Chapter 1 - Time
Chapter 1 - Time
The world is changing
Leaving you behind
The world goes on
Yet you remain
The pain
The irony
The contradiction
You feel it
You live it
It defines you
Leaving you behind
The world goes on
Yet you remain
The pain
The irony
The contradiction
You feel it
You live it
It defines you
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YoriXYamiForever on December 31, 2007, 7:15:33 AM
I get it Kel-chan!! ^^ Great job!!!! Short and to the point ^^KelekiahGaladrian on December 31, 2007, 7:20:30 AM
^^ GLAD YOU LIKE IT! ^^YamiRevea on December 31, 2007, 5:11:55 AM
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That's a really great poem *o* just awesome!! ^^KelekiahGaladrian on December 31, 2007, 5:13:04 AM
Thanks Jenny-chan! It utterly confuses me, 'cause I have no idea what it means, even if I did write it.YamiRevea on December 31, 2007, 5:14:19 AM
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YOur welcome! ^^ but then I really got the message, it's wonderful ^^KelekiahGaladrian on December 31, 2007, 5:15:02 AM
Thanks Jenny-chan! I don't know if I even know what the message is....YamiRevea on December 31, 2007, 5:20:58 AM
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Well, I got that message and everyone else will ^^ trust me, your poem is REALLY good ^^KelekiahGaladrian on December 31, 2007, 5:23:33 AM
Thanks Jenny-chan! I sure hope so. ^^YamiRevea on December 31, 2007, 5:27:52 AM
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They will ^^KelekiahGaladrian on December 31, 2007, 5:28:11 AM
^^