Chapter 1 - Hold On
Submitted January 8, 2008 Updated October 2, 2008 Status Complete | This is a poem I wrote for my real life friend, Songwriter, because of all the stuff we've been through together this last school year. Enjoy!
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Chapter 1 - Hold On
Chapter 1 - Hold On
The world is cold
The world is dreary
No love
No affection
As cold as ice
It hurts
It causes you pain
But you can't let go
Not yet
We still need you
Hold on
Hold on
Hold on to the hope you have
Hold on
Hold on
Hold on for us all
There's no one who needs you more than me
I know you need to leave
But you can't
Not yet
I still need you
Hold on
Hold on
Hold on to the hope you have
Hold on
Hold on
Hold on
For me....
The world is dreary
No love
No affection
As cold as ice
It hurts
It causes you pain
But you can't let go
Not yet
We still need you
Hold on
Hold on
Hold on to the hope you have
Hold on
Hold on
Hold on for us all
There's no one who needs you more than me
I know you need to leave
But you can't
Not yet
I still need you
Hold on
Hold on
Hold on to the hope you have
Hold on
Hold on
Hold on
For me....
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DeathNoteSurvivor on January 8, 2008, 2:31:47 PM
wow thats so good Kel-chan *play shoves you* you gotta tell me when you put these up goof!KelekiahGaladrian on January 9, 2008, 5:56:10 AM
Sorry. I'll tell you next time. *grins cheesily* Thanks though. I'm proud of this one.DeathNoteSurvivor on January 9, 2008, 9:27:51 PM
you should be^^KelekiahGaladrian on January 15, 2008, 6:30:02 AM
I am.YamiRevea on January 8, 2008, 6:14:47 AM
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It has so much emotion...I love it, it's very unique.^^KelekiahGaladrian on January 8, 2008, 6:15:47 AM
Thanks Jenny-chan! I wrote it for Songwriter today because she wrote a song for me and she really needed something like this because of her depressions and such. I'm glad you like it though. ^^YamiRevea on January 8, 2008, 6:23:54 AM
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^^ welcome!! ^^KelekiahGaladrian on January 8, 2008, 6:25:56 AM
*grins* *glomps* ^^