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My Heart

A young teenage girl is kidnapped because of her heratige and forced to become a Steil, an elemental being bound for war. Will she get away or adapt to the unatural life the Steils?

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Prolouge
Submitted: April 22, 2006 • Updated: April 22, 2006
Word count: 857 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 341

Chapter 2 - Chapter 1
Submitted: April 23, 2006 • Updated: April 23, 2006
Word count: 2853 • Size: 15k • Comments: 5 • views: 367

Chapter 3 - Chapter 2
Submitted: April 26, 2006 • Updated: April 26, 2006
Word count: 3368 • Size: 18k • Comments: 3 • views: 345

Comments

Comments (13)

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def456 on November 6, 2006, 4:32:42 AM

def456 on (Chapter: 2)
def456cool i guess there are two plots going on at the same time.i like those!

def456 on November 5, 2006, 7:56:29 AM

def456 on (Chapter: 1)
def456this is good! i usually don,t like reading but to this story i will make an exception!

DarkHieiGurl on May 1, 2006, 2:08:22 PM

DarkHieiGurl on (Chapter: 2)
DarkHieiGurlAah, Jessica. I wouldn't call this character Sierra. She probably changed the name and the character herself. *cough- sierra doesn't have blue eyes remember?-cough* Yeeah.

So I take it you swaped your protagonist to Toren, right?

Ha, you already know I loved this chapter. So I don't have to tell you a thing. ^.~

Though, there were several typographical errors. Next time, before you submit a new chapter, you should rescan your story as to not make little mistakes. Such as misusing a word and spelling errors.

Ketts_Shadow on May 1, 2006, 6:21:26 AM

Ketts_Shadow on (Chapter: 3)
Ketts_ShadowSierra!! Details are ruling the world in your book! I love it! hehe! Therin hit you! hehe! Post more!

FreakyMangaGirl on April 26, 2006, 12:30:28 PM

FreakyMangaGirl on (Chapter: 3)
FreakyMangaGirloh yeah,

BOO YA peoples, I've got first comment!

*does first comment dance*

YESH!

FreakyMangaGirl on April 26, 2006, 12:29:54 PM

FreakyMangaGirl on (Chapter: 3)
FreakyMangaGirl*squeal*

Oh. My. GOD!!!!!!!!!

*jumps up and down*

Your story is SOOOO GOOD!

*bites nails*

I MUST know more. I she from the water clan? She is isn't she?!

*jumps up and down*

OMG!!!!!!!!!

please, PLEEEEASE write more!

*adds to favs*

I LURVE this story!

*hug*

Ketts_Shadow on April 25, 2006, 6:45:15 AM

Ketts_Shadow on (Chapter: 2)
Ketts_ShadowYou freakin change ur name! How is it Sierra at one moment, then Toran he next? Yet...Toran is a cool name. Awe-si-um! ^_^

Ketts_Shadow on April 25, 2006, 6:37:39 AM

Ketts_Shadow on (Chapter: 1)
Ketts_ShadowOh me God! Sierra you freakin witch I love as a friend...the prolouge if freakin awesome! *remind myself 2 screech in joy when I see you in 1st period.* ^_^

FreakyMangaGirl on April 23, 2006, 9:59:17 AM

FreakyMangaGirl on (Chapter: 2)
FreakyMangaGirlOH YEAH!


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