Chapter 2 - Unholy
Submitted November 19, 2008 Updated March 23, 2009 Status Incomplete | this is where my poems are going from now on. (i'm gonig to try to add some longer ones... when i dig them up from wherever im hiding them). i appreciate any criticism and comments people have!
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Chapter 2 - Unholy
Chapter 2 - Unholy
No messengers of hope dare pierce the dreading night,
For wretched phantom miseries consume the unborn light.
Enveloped in obscurity, the trembling life condones,
The whispers of insanity, and fallen angels' moans.
Hell hath forgiven the callous fiends of rage,
Unseemly in the burning claws of undefeated age.
The flame infernal sleeps below the desecrated earth
As shadows of the scorned exiles begin to haunt in mirth.
For wretched phantom miseries consume the unborn light.
Enveloped in obscurity, the trembling life condones,
The whispers of insanity, and fallen angels' moans.
Hell hath forgiven the callous fiends of rage,
Unseemly in the burning claws of undefeated age.
The flame infernal sleeps below the desecrated earth
As shadows of the scorned exiles begin to haunt in mirth.
It screams passion for the topic.
The rythem is perfect even though that might of not been intended.
The message which forms from the lines blending together is quite disctinctive and intriguing.
Amanda Approved.