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Abyss of Doom

this is where my poems are going from now on. (i'm gonig to try to add some longer ones... when i dig them up from wherever im hiding them). i appreciate any criticism and comments people have!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - my moon of sand
Submitted: November 19, 2008 • Updated: November 19, 2008
Word count: 44 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 186

Chapter 2 - Unholy
Submitted: December 4, 2008 • Updated: December 4, 2008
Word count: 67 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 167

Chapter 3 - random
Submitted: December 4, 2008 • Updated: December 4, 2008
Word count: 42 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 180

Chapter 4 - the light in the dark room
Submitted: December 5, 2008 • Updated: December 5, 2008
Word count: 112 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 185

Chapter 5 - confusion in love
Submitted: March 23, 2009 • Updated: March 23, 2009
Word count: 69 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 162

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OceanSoul on April 21, 2009, 12:03:52 AM

OceanSoul on (Chapter: 2)
OceanSoulPowerful piece.
It screams passion for the topic.
The rythem is perfect even though that might of not been intended.
The message which forms from the lines blending together is quite disctinctive and intriguing.
Amanda Approved.

dropdeadjasmine on December 4, 2008, 3:26:04 AM

dropdeadjasmine on (Chapter: 1)
dropdeadjasminewoah...dude u have talent

Kira1 on December 3, 2008, 11:16:57 PM

Kira1 on (Chapter: 2)
Kira1this isnt quite finished..... give me time....