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Chapter 1 - freedom

I got into a fight with some dog whos always slagging me off. So thats the insperation for this poem. Not my best works.

Chapter 1 - freedom

Chapter 1 - freedom
My heart and mind is racing,
As anger is surging painfully through my veins.
My body is changing,
It’s changing for the worst.

I’m seeing red,
My fists are clenched.
You better start running,
Cause you’ve pushed me over the edge.

My mind is focused,
My body ready.
For too long you’ve criticised me,
So now you are punished.

For too long I’ve been hidden in a corner,
Taking in all the threats and taunts.
But now I’m standing up for myself,
And you don’t know how dangerous I am.

I want to hear you whimper,
To see your blood trickling down your face.
For once, I want to feel safe,
Unaware of any problems.

So today I’m going to make you pay,
For all the suffering you caused me.
And to set my self free,
From my greatest fear.

You.

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DarkDusk on April 11, 2004, 11:43:10 PM

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DarkDuskmost definetly I mean what the heck is wrong with people.

Rukira on April 5, 2004, 11:04:52 AM

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Rukiraoooo cool! I can relate xX I never understand why people critisize and insult other people o.o I mean.. wtf does it make them feel more superior by making everyone lower? -.- Its so stupid... Those people should all die and burn in hell xX