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Losing Control

I got into a fight with some dog whos always slagging me off. So thats the insperation for this poem. Not my best works.

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Chapters

Chapter 1 - freedom
Submitted: April 5, 2004 • Updated: April 5, 2004
Word count: 141 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 144

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DarkDusk on April 11, 2004, 11:43:10 PM

DarkDusk on (Chapter: 1)
DarkDuskmost definetly I mean what the heck is wrong with people.

Rukira on April 5, 2004, 11:04:52 AM

Rukira on (Chapter: 1)
Rukiraoooo cool! I can relate xX I never understand why people critisize and insult other people o.o I mean.. wtf does it make them feel more superior by making everyone lower? -.- Its so stupid... Those people should all die and burn in hell xX