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This is yet another poem about something that everyone fears so please listen to what I write and I hope u like it R&R ^_^



Chapter 1 - War
Submitted: July 26, 2006 • Updated: July 26, 2006
Word count: 142 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 221


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RumikoAkura on August 3, 2006, 8:53:46 PM

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RumikoAkuraThat's really cool. My brother was a soldier (luckily, he's out of the Navy now) but my sister's husband is still in the army, and he's a battlefield technician. He got sent to Afghanistan 3 days after they got married, but he's home safe now.
It's always nice to know, and quite ironic to know, that the younger generation have more sense than the elder. Seriously, we should rule the country.

RikusShadow on July 30, 2006, 11:46:34 PM

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RikusShadowwow that poem really TOUCHED THE SOUL! *sniffle* i wish i could write poetry! lol i tried once and it sucked really bad but it was just for a joke.

jamacainprincess on July 30, 2006, 4:40:01 AM

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jamacainprincessomg u should write poems more often this is really sad i love it *+favs*

AmayaAsakura on July 29, 2006, 7:23:56 AM

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AmayaAsakuraYou have a strong Talent For writing Poems! ^_^ I really loved this one! It was really Sad though :( *fave* Keep Writing! ^_^

KillerPanda on July 28, 2006, 12:16:15 PM

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KillerPandaOh wow!*Sniff sniff*That's so so sad.Waaaaaaaaaaaaaa!What a good job!Your so awesome at poems!

inuyasha_naruto_lover on July 27, 2006, 7:18:12 AM

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inuyasha_naruto_loverdude, this is making me almost come to tears!
And I NEVER almost come to tears!
this is awesome!

you are very good at poems!!! -favs-

Sparkly_Bubble_Butterfly on July 26, 2006, 6:29:31 AM

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Sparkly_Bubble_ButterflyWow. Awesome. You might as well have posted it since you didn't get to read it in the talent show. And even though I've said this before, it was amazing.