Feel Like Drowning

Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: June 5, 2004 • Updated: June 5, 2004
Word count: 149 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 178

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Cutelilteen on September 22, 2005, 5:17:33 AM

Cutelilteen on September 22, 2005, 5:17:33 AM (Chapter: 1)

God, why am I crying? I love this poem. It's so sad and deep.

firewingneko on March 16, 2005, 11:33:20 AM

firewingneko on March 16, 2005, 11:33:20 AM (Chapter: 1)

I do feel like that sometimes too... just wish to go in peace...

Ban_Boredom on June 28, 2004, 7:34:45 AM

Ban_Boredom on June 28, 2004, 7:34:45 AM (Chapter: 1)

Wow ur an excellent ehh poet ne? this is amazing and i hope u get more up O_O

RaenaAngel on June 25, 2004, 1:17:07 PM

RaenaAngel on June 25, 2004, 1:17:07 PM (Chapter: 1)

I like ur style, u should try rhyming

senkoneko on June 24, 2004, 1:08:56 PM

senkoneko on June 24, 2004, 1:08:56 PM (Chapter: 1)

Wow!
Sometimes i think of doing that.
Really good poem. I like the way that you seem to know what it is like.

Magical_Stan on June 11, 2004, 9:41:54 AM

Magical_Stan on June 11, 2004, 9:41:54 AM (Chapter: 1)

Well, it's not really a suicide thing. I just wondered what that would be like.

MusicBitch on June 9, 2004, 11:15:16 AM

MusicBitch on June 9, 2004, 11:15:16 AM (Chapter: 1)

OMG! I love your writeing it reminds me of myself alot of times i wish i could die jus die alone in the quiet without anyone around to stop me *sigh* wonderful job *+'s favs.