In Your Eyes

Chapter 1 - Get Out
Submitted: May 1, 2010 • Updated: May 1, 2010
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_ren_tao_fan_ on May 3, 2010, 5:00:47 AM

_ren_tao_fan_ on May 3, 2010, 5:00:47 AM (Chapter: index)

This is a very powerful poem. I can feel the emotion behind it.

Majestik on May 23, 2011, 9:10:19 AM

Majestik on May 23, 2011, 9:10:19 AM (Chapter: index)

Late reply, but thanks for the nice comment. :3

xStandStrongx on January 16, 2011, 12:28:03 PM

xStandStrongx on January 16, 2011, 12:28:03 PM (Chapter: 1)

I think this is amazing I love writing and poetry and write poems too but I love this peace so much the emotion and the story you painted so many pictures in my mind it was great

Majestik on May 23, 2011, 9:09:31 AM

Majestik on May 23, 2011, 9:09:31 AM (Chapter: 1)

Oh, thank you. :)

LoveIsEvol on May 9, 2010, 12:52:40 AM

LoveIsEvol on May 9, 2010, 12:52:40 AM (Chapter: 1)

Heeheehee, ho... *shot*
ANYHOWSER. It's pretty. Is this for... That one girl no one likes?
Well, obviously you do, but whatever.
You called her a ho. XD

Majestik on May 20, 2010, 11:57:24 AM

Majestik on May 20, 2010, 11:57:24 AM (Chapter: 1)

....You're an @$$, Avi! D:<

Out of all that, all you get is "ho"?

Man, frack YOU! *crosses arms and drinks grape drink*