Until The Ocean Sweeps Me Away
Submitted October 11, 2006 Updated October 26, 2006 Status Incomplete | Anntoinette(age 12),Rygine(age 12),Rosilina(age 12),Luffy(age 13),David(Age 13),Nami(age 15) and more,embark on a beutiful romance that only god knows that will happen PPLS!THIS STORY WILL BE CONTINUED ON ME ODAH USAH!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Meeting
Submitted: October 11, 2006 • Updated: October 11, 2006
Word count: 402 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 278
Chapter 2 - Can I?
Submitted: October 13, 2006 • Updated: October 13, 2006
Word count: 466 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 283
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Falconlobo on October 16, 2006, 10:15:45 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 2)
Falconlobo on October 16, 2006, 10:08:44 AM
Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
It's a good start but i would space more so it's easier to readXSpiritedAwayX on October 14, 2006, 4:31:12 AM
XSpiritedAwayX on (Chapter: 1)
nice.Bisutoboto16 on October 13, 2006, 3:23:43 AM
Bisutoboto16 on (Chapter: 2)
Yay, another addition. It's going well, and i wonders what will happen next-th.Chopper: Yah, lol Luffy was ascared of Zoro. :)
Bisutoboto16 on October 11, 2006, 4:44:37 PM
Bisutoboto16 on (Chapter: 1)
Wow tis really nicely started. I wanna see the next bit! :)Chopper: Ah is exciting! And Luffy is in it!
*favs*
maybe add some other characters but instead of Chopper being a reindeer make him human but keep the hat but the hat could have antlers attached to it
Alrong could be a highschool football player/Bully
maybe after this chapter have Luffy find out why she ran away and maybe have a chapter taking place in highschool