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Until The Ocean Sweeps Me Away

Anntoinette(age 12),Rygine(age 12),Rosilina(age 12),Luffy(age 13),David(Age 13),Nami(age 15)
and more,embark on a beutiful romance that only god knows that will happen



Chapter 1 - Meeting
Submitted: October 11, 2006 • Updated: October 11, 2006
Word count: 402 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 282

Chapter 2 - Can I?
Submitted: October 13, 2006 • Updated: October 13, 2006
Word count: 466 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 287


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Falconlobo on October 16, 2006, 10:15:45 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 2)
FalconloboIt's good but still you should spaace better as for ideas

maybe add some other characters but instead of Chopper being a reindeer make him human but keep the hat but the hat could have antlers attached to it

Alrong could be a highschool football player/Bully

maybe after this chapter have Luffy find out why she ran away and maybe have a chapter taking place in highschool

Falconlobo on October 16, 2006, 10:08:44 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
FalconloboIt's a good start but i would space more so it's easier to read

XSpiritedAwayX on October 14, 2006, 4:31:12 AM

XSpiritedAwayX on (Chapter: 1)

Bisutoboto16 on October 13, 2006, 3:23:43 AM

Bisutoboto16 on (Chapter: 2)
Bisutoboto16Yay, another addition. It's going well, and i wonders what will happen next-th.
Chopper: Yah, lol Luffy was ascared of Zoro. :)

Bisutoboto16 on October 11, 2006, 4:44:37 PM

Bisutoboto16 on (Chapter: 1)
Bisutoboto16Wow tis really nicely started. I wanna see the next bit! :)
Chopper: Ah is exciting! And Luffy is in it!