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Immortality

Just some creepy morbid poem I came up with about shadow that really fits my personality. PLEEZ REPLY! PLEEZ!!!

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Chapter 1 - Immortallity
Submitted: February 7, 2006 • Updated: February 7, 2006
Word count: 179 • Size: 1k • Comments: 9 • views: 242

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rasengan on February 23, 2007, 10:45:47 PM

rasengan on (Chapter: 1)
rasengantell the truth, this isn't exactly a piece of shoot... ur right tho it is creepy..sheesh ** shivers down my spine**

Morbidmauler on September 10, 2006, 5:27:02 AM

Morbidmauler on (Chapter: index)
Morbidmauler*stares* um, is that good or bad?

Dashrath on July 14, 2006, 3:06:01 AM

Dashrath on (Chapter: 1)
DashrathIf my friend read this he would piss in his pants,man!

Srinidhi on June 20, 2006, 5:18:52 PM

Srinidhi on (Chapter: index)
SrinidhiIts Ok.

Srinidhi on June 20, 2006, 5:18:14 PM

Srinidhi on (Chapter: 1)
SrinidhiM O R B I D huh?

Morbidmauler on June 7, 2006, 6:28:44 AM

Morbidmauler on (Chapter: index)
Morbidmauleris so.

deshwitatlover on June 7, 2006, 6:06:16 AM

deshwitatlover on (Chapter: index)
deshwitatloverwow that's good, i cant write a poem that doesn't rhyme. Keep it up! it not that big of a piece of shoot either, lol ^-^

RickRaccoon on April 17, 2006, 12:53:40 PM

RickRaccoon on (Chapter: 1)
RickRaccoono.o whoa..that was awsome. i cant write poems without a rhyme scheme but this is great. you definitly got a fav from me ^.^ rock on!

rick

Morbidmauler on April 1, 2006, 1:19:56 AM

Morbidmauler on (Chapter: 1)
Morbidmaulerkillaboy, how did i know it was only a matter of time before you hunted me down no matter where i go?

killaboy on March 17, 2006, 11:34:06 PM

killaboy on (Chapter: 1)
killaboyits ok i guess