Forgotten Autumn and the Bitter Winter
Submitted October 2, 2004 Updated October 2, 2004 Status Incomplete | Just a little poem... =)
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: October 2, 2004 • Updated: October 2, 2004
Word count: 142 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 158
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JaZzyWoLfHowL on November 26, 2004, 6:01:28 PM
JaZzyWoLfHowL on (Chapter: 1)
That was great, Stephanie. You have some talent my friend.SaturnWind on October 3, 2004, 12:17:35 AM
SaturnWind on (Chapter: 1)
It's great! The last ph. is really good, real dreamy...But any case I hope to see more of your poetry.
You mentioned buckled shoes, yay =D!
Jailcrow_of_Mandos on October 2, 2004, 1:34:16 AM
Jailcrow_of_Mandos on (Chapter: 1)
Oh, I love it! It's so very adorable. The system of rhyming in the middle fo a snetence or on the first word of the next adds to the dreamy effect, though it might be easier to read if you chop the sentences at the rhymes, lol. The last stanza just made my heart flutter, though, and the diction is startling ^.^!