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Soft Whisperings

In a world of war between races, 12 year old Tomoki sets off on a journey to save his brother. Joining with many others of different kinds and with different aims, they must work with each other to try and achieve what they wish.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - In a lonely village...
Submitted: October 6, 2005 • Updated: October 6, 2005
Word count: 1700 • Size: 9k • Comments: 6 • views: 205

Chapter 2 - Promises
Submitted: November 7, 2005 • Updated: November 7, 2005
Word count: 3364 • Size: 17k • Comments: 7 • views: 245

Comments

Comments (13)

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Tillyenna on December 13, 2005, 2:56:09 AM

Tillyenna on (Chapter: 2)
TillyennaI LOVE YOU.........please write more
this is gooooooood story
sad but cool

Tillyenna on December 13, 2005, 2:49:16 AM

Tillyenna on (Chapter: 1)
TillyennaTomoki sounds cute.......tis good story

Eoara on November 10, 2005, 5:04:52 PM

Eoara on (Chapter: 2)
Eoaraok, so you wanted me to leave a long comment, eh?

well, for a start Echospheramy's name is so long and hard to pronounce. heh. but it is a good story.

well, i like it.

a bit dark, but not depressing.

grrr...will write more later.

angel_of_beauty_and_light on November 8, 2005, 11:05:37 PM

angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 2)
angel_of_beauty_and_lightYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! IT IS SO GOOD! I can't leave a long comment as have to go to maths in a tic, but it was AMAZING!!!!! Soooooooooooooo cool!!!! Okies Doofus, see you later. Great chapter, I demand you write more as soon as you get home!!! Okies doof, bye lol

Nemya on November 8, 2005, 5:20:30 AM

Nemya on (Chapter: 2)
NemyaNo... The longer comment the better x3

I love recieving long comments.

Eoara on November 8, 2005, 5:16:08 AM

Eoara on (Chapter: 2)
Eoaratyres bon melly....and ani's comment is WAY TOO LONG...anyway....its very good. and you better write mor.e and you are not shootty at writing. anyhow. very good

whatto

pip-pip

Eoara on October 22, 2005, 8:06:33 PM

Eoara on (Chapter: 1)
Eoarathats really good...i really like it. Will you write more soon....pwease....pwease....pwease.!?!?!?!?!

angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 6, 2005, 6:59:12 AM

angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 1)
angel_of_beauty_and_light;___; MEL! THAT IS SOOOO AMAZING! YOU ARE SO AMAZING AT WRITING! NEVER SAY YOU ARE BAD AT WRITING STORIES AGAIN!

Waa! I love it so much! I am going to be as obsessed about this as you are about my story. So there! I will leave as long comments as I can too, just to annoy you!

Anyway, it is soooooooooooooooo good! And so sad! Why did they kill him! I thought everybody liked him! Waaaaaa ;___; Sooooo sad.

You HAVE to write more! It is so good! Please please please please please please please write more soon! Otherwise I will get story deprival! So, yeah, write some more soon! Pleeease *begs* *worships* *builds a shrine to you* *builds a temple to you*