Neyla Revenge

Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: August 1, 2005 • Updated: August 1, 2005
Word count: 1089 • Size: 5k • Comments: 16 • views: 955

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slyartsucker on November 5, 2005, 12:43:00 AM

slyartsucker on November 5, 2005, 12:43:00 AM (Chapter: 1)

nice story write some more.it's just like in the game carmelita's always in trouble and sly would always save her.

allmccro on November 4, 2005, 6:49:57 AM

allmccro on November 4, 2005, 6:49:57 AM (Chapter: 1)

i like it ^___^ Good Work

Neyla11 on November 4, 2005, 1:15:42 AM

Neyla11 on November 4, 2005, 1:15:42 AM (Chapter: 1)

Thanx for reading my story I properly wouldnt put Tom through anything I just dont like arpeggio(Just Kidding)!!

The_Beast_Within on November 2, 2005, 8:00:35 AM

The_Beast_Within on November 2, 2005, 8:00:35 AM (Chapter: 1)

Hey, nice story, so far! I agree with Arpeggio on this one! I hate to think of what you'd have put Tom through, especially if you don't know the truth!

Arpeggio on November 2, 2005, 12:13:04 AM

Arpeggio on November 2, 2005, 12:13:04 AM (Chapter: 1)

Teehee! So happy I wasn't mentioned in it! I can't imagine what you would do to poor little me!!! Good story!!!!

Sly on August 9, 2005, 6:29:41 AM

Sly on August 9, 2005, 6:29:41 AM (Chapter: 1)

amazing it sounds just like us