Neyla Revenge

Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: August 1, 2005 • Updated: August 1, 2005
Word count: 1089 • Size: 5k • Comments: 16 • views: 954

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rikathewolf on December 22, 2006, 9:42:27 AM

rikathewolf on December 22, 2006, 9:42:27 AM (Chapter: 1)

very good nice story too

Weirdo on March 15, 2006, 2:26:31 AM

Weirdo on March 15, 2006, 2:26:31 AM (Chapter: 1)

Oo, I like alot. I would be happy to see continue of thid story! ^__^

Allester on January 9, 2006, 6:50:28 AM

Allester on January 9, 2006, 6:50:28 AM (Chapter: 1)

very very nice inspirtation hit u with a 2x4 by the by how do u put a story in

Sgt_Cooper_Hoorah on December 21, 2005, 4:13:12 AM

Sgt_Cooper_Hoorah on December 21, 2005, 4:13:12 AM (Chapter: 1)

Woot! Me like Only thing is... DOn't bunch your conversations with the narroration..I was lost a moment.:D

Besides that this a Fantastic piece of work. Keep it up Neyla!

Arpeggio on November 29, 2005, 9:25:05 AM

Arpeggio on November 29, 2005, 9:25:05 AM (Chapter: 1)

AHEM?!? WHAT ABOUT MY STORY?!?!?!? NEYLA! I CAN'T BELIEVE MY MORTAL ENEMY HAS MORE COMMENTS ON HER STORY THAN I!!!!! GRRRR....XP

BBfan on November 19, 2005, 7:24:44 AM

BBfan on November 19, 2005, 7:24:44 AM (Chapter: 1)

it looks like u relly like the word thumph......lolz i likes it lots

warpath on November 10, 2005, 10:16:16 AM

warpath on November 10, 2005, 10:16:16 AM (Chapter: 1)

i loved it absolutely beutiful i love sly

Neyla11 on November 7, 2005, 5:20:12 AM

Neyla11 on November 7, 2005, 5:20:12 AM (Chapter: 1)

Thanx for the comments!

AnglofSorrws02 on November 6, 2005, 5:16:15 AM

AnglofSorrws02 on November 6, 2005, 5:16:15 AM (Chapter: 1)

very nice

whyatt-racer on November 5, 2005, 1:44:26 AM

whyatt-racer on November 5, 2005, 1:44:26 AM (Chapter: 1)

very nice story

slyartsucker on November 5, 2005, 12:43:00 AM

slyartsucker on November 5, 2005, 12:43:00 AM (Chapter: 1)

nice story write some more.it's just like in the game carmelita's always in trouble and sly would always save her.

allmccro on November 4, 2005, 6:49:57 AM

allmccro on November 4, 2005, 6:49:57 AM (Chapter: 1)

i like it ^___^ Good Work

Neyla11 on November 4, 2005, 1:15:42 AM

Neyla11 on November 4, 2005, 1:15:42 AM (Chapter: 1)

Thanx for reading my story I properly wouldnt put Tom through anything I just dont like arpeggio(Just Kidding)!!

The_Beast_Within on November 2, 2005, 8:00:35 AM

The_Beast_Within on November 2, 2005, 8:00:35 AM (Chapter: 1)

Hey, nice story, so far! I agree with Arpeggio on this one! I hate to think of what you'd have put Tom through, especially if you don't know the truth!

Arpeggio on November 2, 2005, 12:13:04 AM

Arpeggio on November 2, 2005, 12:13:04 AM (Chapter: 1)

Teehee! So happy I wasn't mentioned in it! I can't imagine what you would do to poor little me!!! Good story!!!!

Sly on August 9, 2005, 6:29:41 AM

Sly on August 9, 2005, 6:29:41 AM (Chapter: 1)

amazing it sounds just like us