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Chapter 1 - My Heaven

i thought of this during Spanish class...THATS probly why im failing ^-^"
but i like it, it turned out a lot better than i thought it would. im kinda trying to make it into a song ^-^"

Chapter 1 - My Heaven

Chapter 1 - My Heaven
I return to me Heaven,
Where i dont live the lie.
I cry on the inside,
But stand stronge as a wall.

You're calling my name, but I dont hear a thing.
You touch my shoulder, but I'm as numb as can be.
You look into my eyes, but I pretend I'm not here.

Give me deliverance,
Let me start anew.
They see me as nothing else,
They tare at my heart and soul,
I feel weak and shreded through and through.
Is it time to give into my pain?

I run back to the the dark corner of my mind,
The place i call me Heaven, my home.
I'll take you there,
Close your eyes, just follow my voice...

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JSLOVE on May 8, 2007, 12:19:14 PM

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JSLOVEwow
good
although i imagined heaven as fluffy white clouds and all the pudding you could dream of, this is good too lol

BTO on May 22, 2004, 2:55:56 AM

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BTOThat is so deep!
I could never right
Like you your awsome!