My Heaven

Submitted
October 23, 2003
Updated
October 23, 2003
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 0k
Words: 124
Comments: 2
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i thought of this during Spanish class...THATS probly why im failing ^-^"
but i like it, it turned out a lot better than i thought it would. im kinda trying to make it into a song ^-^"

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Chapter 1 - My Heaven
Submitted: October 23, 2003 • Updated: October 23, 2003
Word count: 124 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 158

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JSLOVE on May 8, 2007, 12:19:14 PM

JSLOVE on May 8, 2007, 12:19:14 PM (Chapter: 1)

wow
good
although i imagined heaven as fluffy white clouds and all the pudding you could dream of, this is good too lol

BTO on May 22, 2004, 2:55:56 AM

BTO on May 22, 2004, 2:55:56 AM (Chapter: 1)

That is so deep!
I could never right
Like you your awsome!