Chapter 1 - Burn to Die to be Reborn
Submitted November 3, 2003 Updated November 3, 2003 Status Incomplete | dedicated to the San Diego fires...that are destroying my home town
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Chapter 1 - Burn to Die to be Reborn
Chapter 1 - Burn to Die to be Reborn
Light of destruction
the glimer of fear
a path once chosen and cannot be changed
its living, its breathing, its only natural.
the fire burns
it cracks and snaps
it twists and turns
its a whirlwind of death.
its on every whim on where there are lives to burn
no regret, not humble at all
reminding all to never forget
the comming death, its giving a call
the fire burns
its relentless in ways
its wont stopuntill all is singed
its a prayer of rebirth
the comming of nothing
pain, misery, vain, and death
as if it decideds to renew this hell
giving another chance to live
to stand, to breath, to love, to hate
and all to just burn again
the fire burns
its halted cry
its wrath has stoped
smoke staining the sky
clearing and weilding a small green sprout.
the glimer of fear
a path once chosen and cannot be changed
its living, its breathing, its only natural.
the fire burns
it cracks and snaps
it twists and turns
its a whirlwind of death.
its on every whim on where there are lives to burn
no regret, not humble at all
reminding all to never forget
the comming death, its giving a call
the fire burns
its relentless in ways
its wont stopuntill all is singed
its a prayer of rebirth
the comming of nothing
pain, misery, vain, and death
as if it decideds to renew this hell
giving another chance to live
to stand, to breath, to love, to hate
and all to just burn again
the fire burns
its halted cry
its wrath has stoped
smoke staining the sky
clearing and weilding a small green sprout.
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NightWing101 on November 1, 2007, 8:21:51 AM
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That is awsome. I know what u mean San Diego is my home town to! And its burning really REALLY close to a couple of my Relitives. So <3 it!Jailcrow_of_Mandos on July 29, 2004, 2:51:32 PM
Very good. I like your use of adjectives. I liek that part "...just to burn again" and still you end it on a lighter note. Sorry about your home town =( but very nice work.RiRiana on November 8, 2003, 4:11:18 PM
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Your poems are soo good! Write more!Roxy_the_Wolf_demon on November 3, 2003, 12:58:35 AM
i also like this one too