Burn to Die to be Reborn
Submitted November 3, 2003 Updated November 3, 2003 Status Incomplete | dedicated to the San Diego fires...that are destroying my home town
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Chapter 1 - Burn to Die to be Reborn
Submitted: November 3, 2003 • Updated: November 3, 2003
Word count: 142 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 220
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NightWing101 on November 1, 2007, 8:21:51 AM
NightWing101 on (Chapter: 1)
That is awsome. I know what u mean San Diego is my home town to! And its burning really REALLY close to a couple of my Relitives. So <3 it!Jailcrow_of_Mandos on July 29, 2004, 2:51:32 PM
Jailcrow_of_Mandos on (Chapter: 1)
Very good. I like your use of adjectives. I liek that part "...just to burn again" and still you end it on a lighter note. Sorry about your home town =( but very nice work.RiRiana on November 8, 2003, 4:11:18 PM
RiRiana on (Chapter: 1)
Your poems are soo good! Write more!Roxy_the_Wolf_demon on November 3, 2003, 12:58:35 AM
Roxy_the_Wolf_demon on (Chapter: 1)
i also like this one too