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Promises You Can't Take Back

Promises woven, promises broken
A promise made from love will shadier and scar
And a promise made with blood will end with it

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 Part 1
Submitted: September 10, 2005 • Updated: September 10, 2005
Word count: 2415 • Size: 12k • Comments: 15 • views: 422

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Zombies_VS_Unicorns on September 17, 2011, 4:44:20 PM

Zombies_VS_Unicorns on (Chapter: 1)
Zombies_VS_UnicornsThis is beautiful! I lov it~ *Faves*
And the way you wrote it was very nice~ >w<

jackie_jaclie_spicey on June 20, 2006, 8:00:12 AM

jackie_jaclie_spicey on (Chapter: index)
jackie_jaclie_spiceyI wish I wish for the second part! WHERE ARE YOU?

DarkTandemMischeifCats on May 1, 2006, 2:30:02 PM

DarkTandemMischeifCats on (Chapter: 1)
DarkTandemMischeifCatsI love this story so far.I feel so bad for Jack.like kickass writing though. Seriously wicked. I like can,t wait for more*favs*

Demonic_Sora on April 27, 2006, 1:08:45 PM

Demonic_Sora on (Chapter: 1)
Demonic_SoraI really like this, you gotta write more or I'll be sad T_T I wanna knoooooowwww...-whines-

Cartoonz on April 11, 2006, 11:22:28 AM

Cartoonz on (Chapter: 1)
Cartoonzwow.....just...wow. This is really sad, but really good, I want to read the next chapter! D:

ill_hit_u_with_my_teacup on March 4, 2006, 4:33:51 PM

ill_hit_u_with_my_teacup on (Chapter: 1)
ill_hit_u_with_my_teacupomg you have to keep writing love this

Toxic_fairy on February 2, 2006, 1:34:41 AM

Toxic_fairy on (Chapter: 1)
Toxic_fairykoooool!

Planet_Express on November 14, 2005, 4:37:57 AM

Planet_Express on (Chapter: 1)
Planet_ExpressPoor Jack! I just want to hug him ^^ Good, we need more!

swansong on November 6, 2005, 4:27:37 AM

swansong on (Chapter: 1)
swansongwow! Wuya is so scary in this! Great job!

bubblegum_snake on October 19, 2005, 2:59:37 PM

bubblegum_snake on (Chapter: 1)
bubblegum_snakeplease add next chapter soon this is so cool!