Promises You Can't Take Back

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Submitted
September 10, 2005
Updated
September 10, 2005
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 12k
Words: 2,415
Comments: 16
Views: 542
Faves...: 14
Rating: 1

Promises woven, promises broken
A promise made from love will shadier and scar
And a promise made with blood will end with it

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Category: Cartoons » Xiaolin Showdown

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Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 Part 1
Submitted: September 10, 2005 • Updated: September 10, 2005
Word count: 2415 • Size: 12k • Comments: 15 • views: 423

Comments

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Zombies_VS_Unicorns on September 17, 2011, 4:44:20 PM

Zombies_VS_Unicorns on September 17, 2011, 4:44:20 PM (Chapter: 1)

This is beautiful! I lov it~ *Faves*
And the way you wrote it was very nice~ >w<

jackie_jaclie_spicey on June 20, 2006, 8:00:12 AM

jackie_jaclie_spicey on June 20, 2006, 8:00:12 AM (Chapter: index)

I wish I wish for the second part! WHERE ARE YOU?

DarkTandemMischeifCats on May 1, 2006, 2:30:02 PM

DarkTandemMischeifCats on May 1, 2006, 2:30:02 PM (Chapter: 1)

I love this story so far.I feel so bad for Jack.like kickass writing though. Seriously wicked. I like can,t wait for more*favs*

Demonic_Sora on April 27, 2006, 1:08:45 PM

Demonic_Sora on April 27, 2006, 1:08:45 PM (Chapter: 1)

I really like this, you gotta write more or I'll be sad T_T I wanna knoooooowwww...-whines-

Cartoonz on April 11, 2006, 11:22:28 AM

Cartoonz on April 11, 2006, 11:22:28 AM (Chapter: 1)

wow.....just...wow. This is really sad, but really good, I want to read the next chapter! D:

ill_hit_u_with_my_teacup on March 4, 2006, 4:33:51 PM

ill_hit_u_with_my_teacup on March 4, 2006, 4:33:51 PM (Chapter: 1)

omg you have to keep writing love this

Toxic_fairy on February 2, 2006, 1:34:41 AM

Toxic_fairy on February 2, 2006, 1:34:41 AM (Chapter: 1)

koooool!

Planet_Express on November 14, 2005, 4:37:57 AM

Planet_Express on November 14, 2005, 4:37:57 AM (Chapter: 1)

Poor Jack! I just want to hug him ^^ Good, we need more!

swansong on November 6, 2005, 4:27:37 AM

swansong on November 6, 2005, 4:27:37 AM (Chapter: 1)

wow! Wuya is so scary in this! Great job!

bubblegum_snake on October 19, 2005, 2:59:37 PM

bubblegum_snake on October 19, 2005, 2:59:37 PM (Chapter: 1)

please add next chapter soon this is so cool!

xxLennexx on October 17, 2005, 10:36:07 PM

xxLennexx on October 17, 2005, 10:36:07 PM (Chapter: 1)

ummmm.............wow
WUYA SCARES ME *hides under table*
this story is awsome plez put up the next chapter soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CrAzY_fish101 on October 15, 2005, 12:04:48 PM

CrAzY_fish101 on October 15, 2005, 12:04:48 PM (Chapter: 1)

Can't wait for the second chapter!! favs

Hieis_lover_and_obsessor on October 1, 2005, 3:22:11 AM

Hieis_lover_and_obsessor on October 1, 2005, 3:22:11 AM (Chapter: 1)

This is REALLY good so far! Please continue! *favs*

minimannm on September 23, 2005, 4:35:17 AM

minimannm on September 23, 2005, 4:35:17 AM (Chapter: 1)

awesome story, kinda creeped me out and if anything is just as good as your art, which is brilliant anyway so thats a reflection on it.

Nakatsu_Luver on September 22, 2005, 4:20:05 AM

Nakatsu_Luver on September 22, 2005, 4:20:05 AM (Chapter: 1)

This is really Great you are great! I really hope you will continue this story I will wait as long as it takes I promise, I just hope jack doesnt have to suffer anymore when omi walks in there to see jack in that condition.

needler on September 10, 2005, 2:32:37 PM

needler on September 10, 2005, 2:32:37 PM (Chapter: 1)

Awesome! I like the flair of this story,its very original,and Wuya scares me even more now...than she did before...
Whee,keep it up...aww poor Jack...