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Chapter 1 - Poems of the Raven

This is how Raven is feeling after 'Birthmark' (Rae&BB peom inspired me)

Chapter 1 - Poems of the Raven

Chapter 1 - Poems of the Raven
i based it like raven after birthmark...


I told someone a secret I never should,
I lie on my bed,
Feeling so misunderstood,
I said something i shouldnt of said,

This is why im crying,
I just feel like dieing,
I will soon be distroying us all,
when i was little i saw something i shouldnt of saw,

The people i know,
I shouldnt of showed,
They will soon be dead,
And that is what i said,

I slit my wrist,
I wont even be missed,
Blood spilling on my bed,
I hope im soon dead,

I try to stop it,
But i cant control my wit,
i throw the knife,
To stop me from ending my life,

I cry and cry,
why do i try to die,
I deal with my pain,
Some people think ive gone insane,

I wrap my wrist with a part of my cloak,
to give the blood something to soak,
I walk out of my room,
Tring to not show my wound,

People stop me,
But i do ont let them see,
darkness all around,
Not even a sound,

I wake to see a person,
I sit up cursin,
i am welcomed back with a hug,
I wonder about the grave i dug,

Everything is back to as it should be,
But now Everyone cares baout me,
No one cares what i said,
they just dont want me dead.

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(Raven is in her room, again after birthmark)

I sit in the dark,
Looking at the mark,
Carved in my hand,
Made by a cruel man,

I think about what is to come,
How could i be so dumb,
Telling people about my past,
Knowing trust would never last,

I start to cry,
I just want to die,
Ive tried before,
I told them i wouldnt do that anymore,

I walk out the door,
i must do a chore,
Stay with my friends,
Till this world comes to an end

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in a mist...of shadows,
in a land of smoke,
the people of the shadows pulling at my cloak,
i push them away,
but all they say is nae,

there like my emotions,
causing so much comotion,
one a curse of my dad,
oh it just makes me so mad,

my father gave me anger,
he killed my mother with a dagger,
it makes me so mad,
but also so very sad,

but im just glad,
hes dead,
from what he said,


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LightShadeRaven on March 3, 2006, 6:01:34 AM

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LightShadeRavenThats very good.^^

Ichidou_Daisuke on February 3, 2006, 8:55:31 AM

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Ichidou_DaisukeNice. ^^

sis on January 7, 2006, 12:19:39 PM

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sisWOW dude this is good!XD

Mustard_Drunk on December 27, 2005, 6:57:04 AM

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Mustard_Drunkemotional is right! woahness!
FAVES

EvilPie on December 6, 2005, 6:37:46 AM

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EvilPieslightly disturbing. i love it.
:)

sweetypie212 on November 28, 2005, 3:32:23 AM

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sweetypie212amazing and sometimes i feel just like that but nobodys nos yet.
anyway i think its great.

Trigons_apprentice on September 24, 2005, 10:20:55 PM

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Trigons_apprenticeNot bad,enough said

Gothic_number on August 27, 2005, 8:07:54 AM

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Gothic_numberOMG thats a good poem!! i love your rhyming skills!!!
+favs

AmyMission on July 27, 2005, 4:54:40 AM

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AmyMissionbeautaful that is just so beatutaful

artist_of_nevermore on July 12, 2005, 8:18:16 AM

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artist_of_nevermoreNice, I saw the episode and I have to say:
this poem really sums it up in a very emotional way.

Some of your rhymes were pretty close shaves;
But i'm still adding this one poem to my faves.