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Chapter 1 - Poems of the Raven

This is how Raven is feeling after 'Birthmark' (Rae&BB peom inspired me)

Chapter 1 - Poems of the Raven

Chapter 1 - Poems of the Raven
i based it like raven after birthmark...


I told someone a secret I never should,
I lie on my bed,
Feeling so misunderstood,
I said something i shouldnt of said,

This is why im crying,
I just feel like dieing,
I will soon be distroying us all,
when i was little i saw something i shouldnt of saw,

The people i know,
I shouldnt of showed,
They will soon be dead,
And that is what i said,

I slit my wrist,
I wont even be missed,
Blood spilling on my bed,
I hope im soon dead,

I try to stop it,
But i cant control my wit,
i throw the knife,
To stop me from ending my life,

I cry and cry,
why do i try to die,
I deal with my pain,
Some people think ive gone insane,

I wrap my wrist with a part of my cloak,
to give the blood something to soak,
I walk out of my room,
Tring to not show my wound,

People stop me,
But i do ont let them see,
darkness all around,
Not even a sound,

I wake to see a person,
I sit up cursin,
i am welcomed back with a hug,
I wonder about the grave i dug,

Everything is back to as it should be,
But now Everyone cares baout me,
No one cares what i said,
they just dont want me dead.

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(Raven is in her room, again after birthmark)

I sit in the dark,
Looking at the mark,
Carved in my hand,
Made by a cruel man,

I think about what is to come,
How could i be so dumb,
Telling people about my past,
Knowing trust would never last,

I start to cry,
I just want to die,
Ive tried before,
I told them i wouldnt do that anymore,

I walk out the door,
i must do a chore,
Stay with my friends,
Till this world comes to an end

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in a mist...of shadows,
in a land of smoke,
the people of the shadows pulling at my cloak,
i push them away,
but all they say is nae,

there like my emotions,
causing so much comotion,
one a curse of my dad,
oh it just makes me so mad,

my father gave me anger,
he killed my mother with a dagger,
it makes me so mad,
but also so very sad,

but im just glad,
hes dead,
from what he said,


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odd on July 11, 2005, 7:11:49 AM

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oddyou were right, it is kinda like mine :P

ty for me being an insperation to you :P *faves*

leviathin on June 15, 2005, 2:04:51 AM

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leviathinI saw that episode, and I must say, you wrote a very nice poem from it. It's so dark, something I'm sure even Raven herself could appreciate. Keep up the good work!

P.S. Check out my section....I have a decent TT lemon in there you might want to read about Starfire and Robin. Sometime in the near future I'll do one with Robin and Raven, and I'll let you know when that's done.

*faves* story
*faves* author

Raven_the_Dark on June 14, 2005, 10:17:25 AM

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Raven_the_Dark*Shakes her head* another crazed fan

Vampire_King_Gothika on May 25, 2005, 8:05:43 AM

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Vampire_King_GothikaI.....Wish someone...could've told me I....had...a reason..a reason........to live.....*slits throat**falls to the floor*
A Quote From the Raven:"Nevermore"...

Raven_the_Dark on May 15, 2005, 7:28:22 AM

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Raven_the_DarkOK I ADDED 2 MORE LITTLE POEMS IN IT!!

RavenGothGirl on May 13, 2005, 10:34:19 AM

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RavenGothGirldude i love it! *star hugz to writer*

MCRx23x on May 12, 2005, 9:19:00 AM

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MCRx23xthat was sooo good

roxy on May 6, 2005, 1:33:31 PM

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roxythats sad but very good. thank u for the nice comment i like ur poems too very good!

Raven_the_Dark on April 17, 2005, 5:18:52 AM

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Raven_the_DarkRaven thinks she has no reason to live so she trys killing herself and she faints and her friends find her and tell her she has a reason to live

Raven_of_Azarath on April 8, 2005, 11:04:33 PM

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Raven_of_AzarathThat ahd some deep meaning in it.............