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It doesn't really have a designated character, so I chose the one I thought it most likely resembled. ^.^ Have fun!



Chapter 1 - Downpour
Submitted: April 1, 2004 • Updated: April 1, 2004
Word count: 256 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 343


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rainbowfox16 on November 6, 2007, 9:49:04 AM

rainbowfox16 on (Chapter: 1)
rainbowfox16Jeez...You are just intent on making me cry constantly aren't you? *sniffles* Its so...Real. You know, it relates so much to actual people, or me at least. I don't know how others feel but, I love your poem. *favs it*

nyuu on January 29, 2007, 5:07:43 AM

nyuu on (Chapter: 1)
nyuuwow...(a shiver in the back) This is beautiful!! (no, I didn't copy that of the last comments)
It's a very well done transmits the feelings and it's indeed well composed...*faves it*

KotokoPlum on May 26, 2005, 11:15:28 PM

KotokoPlum on (Chapter: 1)
KotokoPlumWow. I was browsing through Juli's faves (for some weird unknown reason) and came across this. This is so beautiful! I don't know who this would reminds me of, but it's powerful all the same. *faves* Very nicely written. ^^

ReiRei on April 21, 2004, 10:13:14 AM

ReiRei on (Chapter: 1)
ReiReiThanks, I appreciate your comments a lot. And you're welcome for the comment because you deserved it! I loved your picture! I mean, the wings. . . the arrows. . . the blood. . . the broken sword. . . It was just beautiful! There's no other word to describe it!

Juli on April 20, 2004, 2:21:21 PM

Juli on (Chapter: 1)
Julibtw: i added this to faves and also thanks for commenting on my pic!^^

Juli on April 20, 2004, 2:19:15 PM

Juli on (Chapter: 1)
Juli*struck speechless* Wow. This is beautiful. I can't believe there haven't been any comments on this yet. The mood is very powerful here.Sorry, but this doesn't really remind me of any particular anime or whatsit, but I think this is good enough to create a new story of its own.