Chapter 198 - Walk Away
Submitted January 4, 2008 Updated April 20, 2009 Status Incomplete | Yes, I did it again. Just five seconds ago. *cries* I had 16 up...and i put one up twice...then tried to delete the duplicate...and i deleted the story...crap...
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Chapter 198 - Walk Away
Chapter 198 - Walk Away
The mirror before her
Shows only the inside
Showing she’s had enough
Showing her what’s inside
For how long will you try
To deceive all around you
A façade pushing all away
So they won’t see your misery
How long until you stop walking away
When will you admit
That your eyes betray you
That you bleed internally
The mirror talks
But she does not even listen
She only smiles
And her shell never shatters
Her mask holds firm
The mirror cracks
Aches
And finally shatters
This façade has deceived
And pushed all away
But it does not deceive me
I see through your disguise
You’re in misery
You bleed internally
You dig yourself a deeper pit
And wallow in your depression
Your façade does not guard you
It hurts you even more
Now none can reach you
And pull you up from despair.
Shows only the inside
Showing she’s had enough
Showing her what’s inside
For how long will you try
To deceive all around you
A façade pushing all away
So they won’t see your misery
How long until you stop walking away
When will you admit
That your eyes betray you
That you bleed internally
The mirror talks
But she does not even listen
She only smiles
And her shell never shatters
Her mask holds firm
The mirror cracks
Aches
And finally shatters
This façade has deceived
And pushed all away
But it does not deceive me
I see through your disguise
You’re in misery
You bleed internally
You dig yourself a deeper pit
And wallow in your depression
Your façade does not guard you
It hurts you even more
Now none can reach you
And pull you up from despair.
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Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm on September 30, 2008, 9:08:41 AM
Rei_Anul_Sama on October 2, 2008, 4:43:21 AM
its the mirror:DFalconlobo on September 29, 2008, 1:21:22 PM
Falconlobo on
interesting but again to deep for me
In some ways i can relate to this. It's the people who really care that keep coming back.
The poem is mostly written in third person, but from the sixth verse onwards 'it' switches to second, and refers to 'me'. Is it the mirror talking or some other mystery person?