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A teenaged girl finds a boy who had saved her as a child. She thinks he's cute, then finds out that his father was one of the firebenders that killed her mom and ruined her home. Does her opinion change?



Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the Memories
Submitted: February 24, 2006 • Updated: February 24, 2006
Word count: 233 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 269

Chapter 2 - Flames of Hatred, Tears of Sorrow
Submitted: February 24, 2006 • Updated: February 24, 2006
Word count: 616 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 252


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Rioki_Lilac on April 24, 2006, 9:37:50 AM

Rioki_Lilac on (Chapter: 1)
Rioki_LilacOK, I have something to admit: I kinda stole the bigger part of chapter two from a book I read once called Rowan Hood. I stole the best part of the scene don't kill me for copyrighting please oh please! *prays to the literary dieties* And I can't post my next part or fix either of these parts and I lost my stream of thought so I might just cancel it.... *gets mobbed*

LadyNaru on April 18, 2006, 12:22:47 AM

LadyNaru on (Chapter: 2)
LadyNaruyou write very well! I really go into your story!

Destiny_Queen on April 17, 2006, 3:05:26 AM

Destiny_Queen on (Chapter: 2)
Destiny_QueenI repeat myself~ wonderful work! The title is very eye-catching.

Destiny_Queen on April 17, 2006, 3:03:37 AM

Destiny_Queen on (Chapter: 1)
Destiny_QueenGood going Becky! It's awesome. BTW- DON'T call me DesQ!

Rioki_Lilac on April 15, 2006, 1:59:56 PM

Rioki_Lilac on (Chapter: 1)
Rioki_LilacAnd to those of you who care? The boy is NOT Zuko. It is a boy named Hayan.

Rioki_Lilac on March 31, 2006, 11:48:50 AM

Rioki_Lilac on (Chapter: 2)
Rioki_Lilaci would upload the next part, but the site stopped accepting my submissions.

bijoukaiba on February 27, 2006, 5:48:07 AM

bijoukaiba on (Chapter: 2)
bijoukaibaYeah! I want this continued too!


bijoukaiba on February 27, 2006, 5:46:19 AM

bijoukaiba on (Chapter: 1)
bijoukaibaCool stuff

Raven_Hedgehog on February 24, 2006, 1:31:39 AM

Raven_Hedgehog on (Chapter: 2)
Raven_HedgehogGreat story! *claps hands wildly* Continue please please please please please......
*3 days later*
please please please??