Rainbow Ball
Submitted July 21, 2009 Updated July 21, 2009 Status Complete | Thank you Mizy for the inspirational pics: http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-760817.html http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-759275.html Check out Mizy's artwork: http://www.fanart-central.net/profile-MizyMiyajima.php
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Chapter 1 - Rainbow Ball
Submitted: July 21, 2009 • Updated: July 21, 2009
Word count: 3900 • Size: 20k • Comments: 4 • views: 435
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_ren_tao_fan_ on August 2, 2011, 3:09:05 AM
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luckylace222 on August 10, 2009, 6:49:52 AM
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And it all centers around rainbows somehow! XD BRILLIANT! At first I was preparing for something terribly inhumane and scary to happen, because everytime I head short stories like this on FAC that goes by the lines of, "He cared about his brother/sister so much...they were best friends...blah blah". Then the author makes the sibling die from some bloody car crash or alien attack. ;U
You were able to make nobody die AND make it good!!! *favs* xD I hope little Ryan and Lance will live happily ever after. ;U Maybe this is the moment when Ryan needs to plead Lance to take out his magic carpet and fly him away for some "real" alone time. xD MMMM GOOD STORIES! Makes me happy! <3
Rubius on August 11, 2009, 1:42:24 AM
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While reading the hard copy of this I found some typos that I need to change. I really need to not proofread at 3 a.m. or I need a proofreading staff. :D
Mizy wanted me to write more about the two of them, and I said, "no".
However, these two have been invading my dreams lately, so I agreed to make this into a short story with maybe 8-15 chapters.
MizyMiyajima on July 21, 2009, 7:28:59 PM
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I felt like my heart was going to burst while reading it !! X'D God this is just so beautiful! I feel like, like i wanna make a manga out of this story! >XD
-“Why didn’t I put the bear in a box?” Lance sighed.-
if i did, u wouldnt know that it was a bear inside wouldnt u! >XD haha
I cant wait for the next chapter !!! ;D
Rubius on July 22, 2009, 12:23:39 AM
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I think it would be cool to see you make a manga out of this. But you sound busy so don't do it if you don't have the time.
About another chapter, I really hadn't planned on writing anymore than this. I was thinking that I would continue coloring some of you pictures, then pick two of them and write a short story (no more than 15 pages) about them. With your permission of course. :)