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A Kitsune's Eyes

a short poem about Youko Kurama.



Chapter 1 - A kitsune's Eyes
Submitted: February 22, 2004 • Updated: February 22, 2004
Word count: 97 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 166


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Dark_Angel_Wings on February 24, 2005, 6:35:07 AM

Dark_Angel_Wings on (Chapter: 1)
Dark_Angel_Wings*tilts head to the side* That was.... very good! ^_^ *hugs gently* Keep it up. Oh and uhhh.... stop describing my eyes ok?

Silver_Fox_theif on July 6, 2004, 2:24:58 PM

Silver_Fox_theif on (Chapter: 1)
Silver_Fox_theif*coughs from hug* yes it's normal for you to not like your work, but others do.

Tinyclownbean1 on July 6, 2004, 8:12:11 AM

Tinyclownbean1 on (Chapter: 1)
Tinyclownbean1Wow!! I love poetry...I can write fairly good so people tell me. I dont really like my work but everyone else seems too. Is that normal??? Ne ways Love it...very original and sad...too much pain. *Hugs*

Zeke_hieis_girl on February 23, 2004, 12:56:58 PM

Zeke_hieis_girl on (Chapter: 1)
Zeke_hieis_girlthat was really good i wish my poems rhymed geez it is so hard to write a poem that works and sounds good i love the way you put all his pain in these beautiful words although i just wanted you to know i am not a ningen but that statement at the end might stand true to others. well i was wondering if you could take a look at my poems and tell me what you think? if you could i would be most greatful ^__^