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THE EYES THAT WATCH ME

This is my story that i started writting ages ago...only decided to it up now as sister said it was cool.
The characters are mine.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 -3
Submitted: September 9, 2005 • Updated: September 9, 2005
Word count: 2399 • Size: 12k • Comments: 2 • views: 252

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Jawsismyhomie on February 19, 2006, 10:22:06 AM

Jawsismyhomie on (Chapter: 1)
JawsismyhomieWOW

Splixx on September 14, 2005, 11:32:34 PM

Splixx on (Chapter: 1)
Splixxthe story line is a bit screwed over i have to do this again but meh..please tell me what you think i need to do to improve it please. thanks.
*all critisism is welcome*