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Chapter 1 - And So It Begins

This story has drama,a bit of violence and a destiney known to those who wish to walk the periles path.

Plz Read And Reveiw^^

Chapter 1 - And So It Begins

Chapter 1 - And So It Begins
Narrator: Kimu started as a straight A student in Pokemon School. She left home with her Glaceon once she turned 11, and got started with encouragement from her father and mother. She works in a traveling rock band called "The Interdimention Cheetah Kids". Now her journey begins with her first T.V. broadcasted concert in her home region, the Kanto Region.
Kimu: Bye mom. Bye dad. Im off on my journey.
Mom: Be careful.
Dad: Kimu, here another Pokemon for your journey. Its a Shadeshink. Professor Oak wanted you to get it.
Kimu: Wow. Thanks Dad. Tell the Professor I said thanks. Bye-bye. (starts her journey and gets into her first Pokemon battle with her rival Kayla)
Kayla: Kimu hows about a battle. Hope your not going to chicken out?
Kimu: Why would I? I choose you, Icey!!!!
Kayla: Go, Meowth!!!!
Kimu: Still hasnt evolved, huh? Too bad. I was hoping for a challenge. Like when we first battled. (both remembered)
Little Kimu: Go, Icey!! I choose you!!!!
Little Kayla: Go, Meowth!!!!
Little Kimu: Icey use Tackle!!!
Little Kayla: Doge it Meowth!!!(Still gets hit) Kimu why you littleHuh???
Little Kimu: *gasps*(sees her Eevee evolve into a Glaceon) Yay my Evee evolved into a Glaceon!!!!
Little Kayla: No way!!!!!!!!!!! Why did your Pokemon evolve before mine??(back to present)
Kayla: Ill never forget that.
Kimu: Icey use Swift attack.
Kayla: Meowth doge it!!!!(still gets hit)
Kimu: I win again.
Kayla: Danm you Kimu.
Kouji: Hey! No one curses at my Girlfriend and gets away with it.
Kayla: Oh& shes your girlfriend? Sorry Kimu.
Kimu: Kouji its ok she not even worth it.
Kayla: Ill get you soon Kimu just you wait.

To Be Continued&

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moog1895 on September 17, 2007, 10:26:43 AM

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moog1895lol i luff meowth

DivineNightshade on August 20, 2007, 2:27:14 AM

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DivineNightshadeWoah great story so far! I love pokemon!

littlecapnjack on August 19, 2007, 5:58:34 PM

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littlecapnjackVery Good!

XxKayxKayxX on August 19, 2007, 3:34:16 PM

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XxKayxKayxXgood story so far ^.^ haha the rival has my name :P i'm so mean =p

moog1895 on August 15, 2007, 8:03:51 AM

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moog1895Ohh! Very cool!

SasukesGirl01 on August 14, 2007, 10:48:16 AM

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SasukesGirl01i like it so far WOOHOO YOU WON!!! lol nice !

AlleyCat17 on August 14, 2007, 10:17:24 AM

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AlleyCat17wow really good and you should space each peoples talks and when you do a flashback you should use italic words it look better and you now when it's a flashback then you can end it with end flashback.i hope you don't mine these are just some idea for wighting stores.oh and great story so far.and keep up the great work.

sasukeXsakuraforever on August 14, 2007, 3:56:51 AM

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sasukeXsakuraforeverWow! Thats a great start off! ^_~

Konohasdarkshadow on August 12, 2007, 2:04:14 PM

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Konohasdarkshadow...Kayla is very mean!!!...im glad you beat her!

Symphoniaprincess101 on August 13, 2007, 9:25:53 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101Yes she is><Thanks^^

DragonDragon112 on August 13, 2007, 7:05:56 AM

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DragonDragon112sweet! =3

Symphoniaprincess101 on August 13, 2007, 9:22:30 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101thank u^^