A big mistake
Submitted August 5, 2007 Updated July 13, 2008 Status Complete | This is my ORIGINAL story everything is © TKxKari224 except for kaoru, kaoru is © xEmotional and also hikagu is © NAERA (xEmotional helped me with some of the parts ^^)Claire is © NAERA
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Introductions
Submitted: August 5, 2007 • Updated: July 13, 2008
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Chapter 2 - Kaoru's appearence
Submitted: August 5, 2007 • Updated: August 5, 2007
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Chapter 3 - hikaga the teachers worst nightmare!
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
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Chapter 4 - detention from a whoopie cushion
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
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Chapter 5 - The begining of a stalker
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
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Chapter 6 - New roommate
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
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Chapter 7 - kaoru has a fanclub!
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
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Chapter 8 - Kaoru's past
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
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Chapter 9 - an akward silence
Submitted: August 8, 2007 • Updated: August 8, 2007
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Chapter 10 - GLOMP!
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
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Chapter 11 - the big fight and claires arrival
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
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Chapter 12 - Meeting Claire
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
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Chapter 13 - a trip to the theater
Submitted: August 11, 2007 • Updated: August 11, 2007
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Chapter 14 - Sleepover
Submitted: August 11, 2007 • Updated: August 11, 2007
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Chapter 15 - spin the bottle!
Submitted: August 12, 2007 • Updated: August 12, 2007
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Chapter 16 - Spying 1
Submitted: August 20, 2007 • Updated: August 20, 2007
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Chapter 17 - This ones for all the cookies!
Submitted: August 22, 2007 • Updated: August 22, 2007
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Chapter 18 - should we even ask..?
Submitted: August 25, 2007 • Updated: August 25, 2007
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Chapter 19 - Sanome's plan! we go where!?
Submitted: August 27, 2007 • Updated: August 27, 2007
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Chapter 20 - christmas party setup
Submitted: September 4, 2007 • Updated: September 4, 2007
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Chapter 21 - the suckiest chapter in the entire world..
Submitted: September 6, 2007 • Updated: September 6, 2007
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Chapter 22 - "the fight for our lives!"
Submitted: September 10, 2007 • Updated: September 10, 2007
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Chapter 23 - a fake!?
Submitted: September 14, 2007 • Updated: September 14, 2007
Word count: 521 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 275
Chapter 24 - hikaga's fight, the girls are in trouble!
Submitted: September 17, 2007 • Updated: September 17, 2007
Word count: 621 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 340
Chapter 25 - Xel's doom, the end *bows*
Submitted: September 23, 2007 • Updated: September 23, 2007
Word count: 886 • Size: 5k • Comments: 5 • views: 297
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NAERA on February 16, 2008, 7:03:24 AM
TKxKari224 on February 16, 2008, 7:05:42 AM
zomg!! YEAH!!!!!!!! >.<THAT WOULD BE FREAKING AWESOME!! O.O *explodes* omg! seriously i love this idea!!1 am going to do it!!! :D
I wonder how i should start though..and will they be older, hmm...these are the things a writer needs to think of XD
NAERA on February 16, 2008, 7:08:42 AM
TKxKari224 on February 17, 2008, 11:58:36 PM
omg yeah!!!!! X3One of them should turn evil >:3
but who, your right, who...hmmm
i think it should be one of these people:
Jin
Sanome
Hikaga
Then they could be all like: oh noersh!!
They the rest could try and save the one who turned evil!! OMG OMG!! im dying here! this is gonna be GREATT!!!
NAERA on February 18, 2008, 12:13:58 AM
TKxKari224 on February 18, 2008, 12:14:55 AM
XD yeh! ^^Lol yeah, thats the trouble :P
And ive alrady got one chapter up of the new one!! XD
NAERA on February 18, 2008, 12:17:33 AM
TKxKari224 on February 18, 2008, 12:17:57 AM
SQUEE! ^^ i did! :D :Domg! im so excited!! XD
NAERA on February 18, 2008, 12:20:02 AM
TKxKari224 on February 18, 2008, 12:21:04 AM
:DNAERA on September 24, 2007, 8:08:10 AM
TKxKari224 on September 24, 2007, 8:09:35 AM
THANK YOU!!! *hugs* i loved it to *tear* but im planning on drawing scenes out of it ^^NAERA on September 24, 2007, 8:32:28 AM
TKxKari224 on October 2, 2007, 9:09:21 AM
yay ^^ thats awesome! :)xEmotional on September 23, 2007, 10:24:06 AM
whoooooo :] kaoru is so great !
TKxKari224 on September 24, 2007, 5:33:52 AM
xD is that all ur gonna sy!? lol.gaaralover1 on September 17, 2007, 12:08:43 PM
Awesome.. What school do these people go to?TKxKari224 on September 18, 2007, 4:51:42 AM
the school in the clouds or something like that XD ^^xEmotional on September 17, 2007, 7:56:43 AM
uh oh, spagettio :oTKxKari224 on September 18, 2007, 4:51:17 AM
yuppers ^^NAERA on September 17, 2007, 8:18:09 AM
TKxKari224 on September 18, 2007, 4:50:25 AM
heh heh xDNAERA on September 14, 2007, 6:21:21 AM
TKxKari224 on September 16, 2007, 4:51:27 AM
lolxEmotional on September 14, 2007, 5:51:31 AM
it's .. XEL . lolol rofl omg lol ahaha lmao ahaha lol omg rofl .just kiddin' .
NAERA on September 11, 2007, 7:48:45 AM
TKxKari224 on September 11, 2007, 8:08:36 AM
xDxEmotional on September 10, 2007, 10:18:28 AM
oh mah gawd .kaoru is so cool, its not even funny .
TKxKari224 on September 11, 2007, 4:55:30 AM
xDNAERA on September 6, 2007, 7:45:19 AM
TKxKari224 on September 10, 2007, 5:17:17 AM
lolNAERA on September 5, 2007, 7:41:21 AM
TKxKari224 on September 5, 2007, 8:36:08 AM
XDxEmotional on September 4, 2007, 1:42:37 AM
lol oh my . is it a dead person ? risen from the grave to eat brains ?
juust kiddin'
TKxKari224 on September 4, 2007, 1:43:30 AM
..ew...xEmotional on September 4, 2007, 7:48:53 AM
haha, blehhhhhhh 1! write moreTKxKari224 on September 6, 2007, 7:40:12 AM
yayaNAERA on August 28, 2007, 9:41:36 AM
TKxKari224 on September 4, 2007, 12:13:54 AM
XD i enjoyed writing it ^^xEmotional on August 27, 2007, 5:34:48 AM
write more .now .
seriously .
im bored.
and .
i wanna read .
more .
k?
YOU MADE A LIL MISTAKE !
TKxKari224 on August 27, 2007, 5:38:17 AM
i know! u told me just now oK EVER1 DISREGARD THE FACT THAT CLAIRE IS IN JINS ROOM AND SHE SAID SHE WAS IN THE CAFETERIA!!xEmotional on August 27, 2007, 5:39:05 AM
ohahoha .okay, seriously .
write more .
what else is there for you to do ? NOTHING !
xEmotional on August 25, 2007, 7:25:11 AM
lol xD what did he whisper to arina's ear ?
TKxKari224 on August 25, 2007, 7:27:23 AM
lol i dont think you wanna know xPchibi terra: translations she dosnt know either
me: hey i do to!..maybe..possible...probabley..
xEmotional on August 25, 2007, 7:28:35 AM
c'mon gimmeh a hint .i wanna know .
was it nasty ? lol jkjkjk !
but seriously, i want to know ,
was it about my little boy creation ? -kaoru-
TKxKari224 on August 25, 2007, 8:19:04 AM
*anime sweatdrop* ummmmmmmmm........hmm it was something about kaoru?xEmotional on August 25, 2007, 8:20:41 AM
tell .. me .. or il run over and beat you up ! XD jk .
but honestly, i wanna know !
TKxKari224 on August 25, 2007, 8:22:51 AM
i dont know what it was L:LxEmotional on August 25, 2007, 8:23:22 AM
-sigh- fine !
but why'd she go 'EEEW!'
TKxKari224 on August 25, 2007, 8:28:28 AM
because you know hikaga he prolly said i know whats in your nose or something!xEmotional on August 25, 2007, 8:29:08 AM
rofl .okay okay, now i will stop bothering yeh .
lol it was fun >.<
TKxKari224 on August 25, 2007, 8:35:47 AM
haha *sarcasim laugh*NAERA on August 25, 2007, 3:17:08 AM
TKxKari224 on August 25, 2007, 4:27:40 AM
lol itll come soon ^^xEmotional on August 23, 2007, 2:41:29 AM
ohohoho ! XDxEmotional on August 21, 2007, 11:38:17 PM
haha, what an excitingly cheerful story .TKxKari224 on August 21, 2007, 11:39:56 PM
lolNAERA on August 20, 2007, 6:41:20 AM
TKxKari224 on August 21, 2007, 11:22:30 PM
thhnx ^^ im adding another one now ^^Hayley864 on August 19, 2007, 10:56:17 AM
baha. jin is so annoying to poor kaoru.TKxKari224 on August 20, 2007, 6:05:12 AM
heehee its because he thinks there best buddies XD well they kinda are friends tho... hmm XDHayley864 on August 19, 2007, 10:59:58 AM
pft. detention's only like 5 seconds..TKxKari224 on August 20, 2007, 4:21:33 AM
lol i had to make it interesting XDHayley864 on August 19, 2007, 10:52:40 AM
bahaha. yay kaoru :DxEmotional on August 12, 2007, 5:08:03 AM
XD you were begging for help :]
You:: "WHAT DO I WRITE NOWWWWWWWWW !!!"
Me:: "GET A LIFEEEEE!"
JKJK .
anyways, yeah, YAY, next chapter, things will start to heat up . hehehe .
TKxKari224 on August 12, 2007, 5:10:52 AM
u turd!xEmotional on August 12, 2007, 5:12:39 AM
ew gross word XD :PHayley864 on August 19, 2007, 10:44:08 AM
baaahah. adriana. you make me laughxEmotional on August 20, 2007, 1:38:59 AM
lol hayley . :PNAERA on August 12, 2007, 3:32:17 AM
TKxKari224 on August 12, 2007, 5:04:36 AM
lol its continued now ^^xEmotional on August 11, 2007, 12:49:35 PM
OMG OMG IM SO EXCITED I CAN BARELY BREATH !TKxKari224 on August 12, 2007, 1:44:01 AM
lolzxEmotional on August 11, 2007, 12:50:22 PM
im gonna help you make claire and kaoru's little 'thing' PERFECT its gonna be SO HOT . well .. not 'hot' but i mean .. 'cute' yup yup ..
-heheheeeeeee-
TKxKari224 on August 12, 2007, 1:42:32 AM
calm down ull freak everyone out XDxEmotional on August 12, 2007, 3:25:29 AM
ohoho . :] seriously . You're stuck .
NAERA on August 11, 2007, 3:56:37 AM
TKxKari224 on August 11, 2007, 6:33:31 AM
okok guys lolxEmotional on August 11, 2007, 6:50:02 AM
XD !xEmotional on August 11, 2007, 2:52:22 AM
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH You made my lovley kaoru sound like a MEANIE !
you have to make him and claire get together in the next chapter ! OKAY ! YA !
TKxKari224 on August 11, 2007, 2:49:02 AM
heeheee heeeNAERA on August 10, 2007, 5:51:39 AM
TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 8:59:43 AM
hhahaha im writingxEmotional on August 10, 2007, 7:40:26 AM
ya, sister . continue ! -i also freak out and fall to the ground-
TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 8:59:29 AM
lolNAERA on August 10, 2007, 5:48:24 AM
xEmotional on August 10, 2007, 7:39:44 AM
XD i definetely enjoyed writing it XDXDNAERA on August 10, 2007, 7:45:20 AM
xEmotional on August 11, 2007, 1:30:11 AM
XDXDNAERA on August 8, 2007, 2:59:57 AM
TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 1:01:13 AM
i know rite! how scary XD jkNAERA on August 10, 2007, 1:22:50 AM
TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 1:24:52 AM
lol i dont know XD but i totally agree! he should go accidentally fall off a cliff then jin should pop in and kill him again with his keyblade XDNAERA on August 10, 2007, 1:31:59 AM
TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 1:33:32 AM
oh totally (LOL)NAERA on August 10, 2007, 1:42:51 AM
TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 1:44:21 AM
lol demyx should totally fall off the cliff it would be great if he rly did that way we'd never have to battle him again! MUAHANAERA on August 10, 2007, 6:22:49 AM
TKxKari224 on August 11, 2007, 2:50:12 AM
i so agree i tried like 240 times!Chibi: shes not kidding
Alex:yeh i watched her XD (brother)
xEmotional on August 7, 2007, 1:45:14 AM
ohohoooooooooooooooooooo this was one of the best chapters, but i think the chapter with the fanclub was best XDTKxKari224 on August 7, 2007, 1:56:40 AM
lol yteah that one was histarical!NAERA on August 6, 2007, 9:55:41 PM
TKxKari224 on August 7, 2007, 1:56:16 AM
lol yeah my sisters character if very attractive she says XDNAERA on August 7, 2007, 2:24:08 AM
TKxKari224 on August 8, 2007, 2:19:01 AM
what do u mean?NAERA on August 8, 2007, 2:58:43 AM
TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 4:27:21 AM
nonononno he totally is!!NAERA on August 6, 2007, 9:55:20 PM
TKxKari224 on August 7, 2007, 1:55:47 AM
lolNAERA on August 6, 2007, 9:54:37 PM
TKxKari224 on August 7, 2007, 1:55:37 AM
yuppers ^_^NAERA on August 6, 2007, 6:28:56 AM
TKxKari224 on August 6, 2007, 10:00:41 AM
lol theres gonna be more about him ^^xEmotional on August 6, 2007, 6:44:26 AM
LOLnice nice
TKxKari224 on August 6, 2007, 6:45:09 AM
lolNAERA on August 6, 2007, 6:30:04 AM
TKxKari224 on August 6, 2007, 6:38:56 AM
lol it keeps going! ^^ heeheeangelfox on August 6, 2007, 4:42:23 AM
HATE MR. KIP! >.<TKxKari224 on August 6, 2007, 6:35:39 AM
lolxEmotional on August 5, 2007, 11:18:23 AM
one big PARTY ! lol i told you to write that XD anyways , hurry up and make my man a STAR! jkjk . write more though . and make more characters .
and make some have a crush on my man
TKxKari224 on August 6, 2007, 2:58:29 AM
i made her now it arina time oh stalker! hahaTKxKari224 on August 6, 2007, 1:36:35 AM
i will i willxEmotional on August 6, 2007, 1:52:38 AM
bwahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :]NAERA on August 5, 2007, 11:05:14 AM
TKxKari224 on August 6, 2007, 1:35:58 AM
in ch. 3 ^^NAERA on August 5, 2007, 9:03:18 AM
TKxKari224 on August 5, 2007, 11:03:05 AM
lolxEmotional on August 5, 2007, 7:42:06 AM
someone has a CRUUUUUSHHHIE!XD
TKxKari224 on August 5, 2007, 8:58:09 AM
lol wait and seeee