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Such is Sorrow And Nothing More

Poetry describing my life... Nothing that would matter to you...



Chapter 1 - The Fallen Angel
Submitted: December 18, 2007 • Updated: December 18, 2007
Word count: 145 • Size: <1k • Comments: 10 • views: 200

Chapter 2 - Death
Submitted: December 27, 2007 • Updated: December 27, 2007
Word count: 108 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 218

Chapter 3 - Left
Submitted: January 20, 2008 • Updated: January 20, 2008
Word count: 33 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 212

Chapter 4 - The Heavens Cried
Submitted: January 20, 2008 • Updated: January 20, 2008
Word count: 54 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 199


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pixiepumpkin on December 5, 2008, 1:52:35 AM

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pixiepumpkinSorry it's taken so long to comment!

(Summary of your whole poem/story)'re floating between the border of heaven and hell? You've had a rough life I see, even rougher then mine. Do not worry though, I know there are people who love you! I mean look at all of us! Your friends on FAC, we're here and ALWAYS will be Danti-chan!

SpiralDemon on December 2, 2008, 6:45:16 AM

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SpiralDemonI have nothing to say..... Except that your poetry has moved and inspired me...... I'm spiralling towards insanity and I know how you must feel.....

XDarkTinkerbellX on March 2, 2008, 1:53:11 AM

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XDarkTinkerbellXDante,...these are beautiful,....
I love them,.....
please write more of them,...
<3 Tink

TheForgotten on March 2, 2008, 2:01:26 AM

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TheForgottenI will, friend. My quill does not stop.

meray on January 29, 2008, 10:19:07 PM

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meraythe poems are so deep like the black night with no light. when the wolf tries to howl but what will he howl at? if noithing is so pure then what is pure. is something like a rose or a red rose that can only cry with blood? the poems touched me like the sounds of people crying with laughter when people need love i am one of those people who needs love. what love can bring us is only...fear is it that we fear to love?

TheForgotten on January 31, 2008, 2:56:42 AM

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TheForgottenLove brings so many things..... Fear is among them....

meray on January 31, 2008, 4:32:48 AM

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meray on January 31, 2008, 10:18:43 PM

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meray*blushes* then you too seeking love? or are you afraid of whut might become of love? then why do we fear love? is love the time to have happiness or is it to be depressed cuase nobody will love? i too am deppressed but still finding myself in the dark with one a rose that cries blood, or the black rose which also cries blood. cuase nobody loves a deppressed person in there life? or is it that...we can't love?

TheForgotten on February 2, 2008, 7:02:33 AM

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TheForgottenIt's hard to love when you have a heart that doesn't beat....

meray on February 5, 2008, 2:36:19 AM

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merayespecially the ones who can't love proper to trick you

Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm on January 29, 2008, 4:54:13 AM

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Gardian_of_the_shadow_relmOh man....I feel for ya. thats so sad.....but beautiful poem though.

TheForgotten on January 29, 2008, 9:20:37 AM

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TheForgottenThank you....

Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm on January 29, 2008, 4:57:47 AM

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Gardian_of_the_shadow_relmHow frustratating.....*hugs* your never really alone, listen with your heart that sounds cheesy. But it's true. ^_^

TheForgotten on January 29, 2008, 9:20:22 AM

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TheForgottenHow can one listen to their heart, if it has no heartbeat...?

mickyD503 on January 20, 2008, 11:51:05 PM

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mickyD503So... you are earth bound and rejected by heaven and hell, terribly depressing, how can you live your life of despiration?

TheForgotten on January 22, 2008, 11:30:44 AM

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TheForgottenI do not really live....... I simply exist..... And what I do now..... I simply tend to the empty household that was my parent's.... Care for my mother's roses...... Study in my father's laboratory....... Read in the library....... And write, of course....... Write as they wished of me.......

chaos_kitten8 on January 22, 2008, 7:17:13 AM

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TheForgotten on January 22, 2008, 11:27:38 AM

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TheForgottenI made not too many friends there.... Although...... I did make what one could consider a friend....... I now remember...... She asked of me to thank Holly.....

chaos_kitten8 on December 27, 2007, 7:37:11 AM

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TheForgotten on December 27, 2007, 2:30:09 PM

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TheForgottenThank you.... Though I have never heard of these Lemony Snicket books you speak of.....

chaos_kitten8 on December 28, 2007, 7:11:28 AM

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TheForgotten on January 19, 2008, 12:01:35 PM

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TheForgottenThey do sound rather.... Sad...........

DragonGirl1136 on January 23, 2008, 1:12:56 AM

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DragonGirl1136Naw, they're awesome! =D

DragonGirl1136 on December 20, 2007, 11:43:02 PM

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*wipes tear from eye* That's incredible. Really deep. *goes to throw away my pathetic poetry*

TheForgotten on December 21, 2007, 4:40:19 AM

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TheForgottenI thank you as well...

chaos_kitten8 on December 20, 2007, 9:19:01 PM

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TheForgotten on December 21, 2007, 4:39:53 AM

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TheForgottenThank you...

swampertgirl0504 on December 19, 2007, 12:57:13 AM

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swampertgirl0504hmmmm. Deep.

TheForgotten on December 19, 2007, 11:42:49 AM

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TheForgottenI suppose...

Graceful8Vampire8Godess8 on December 18, 2007, 12:22:23 PM

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Graceful8Vampire8Godess8Interesting... I like it. But it's interesting :)

TheForgotten on December 18, 2007, 12:23:27 PM

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TheForgottenThank you...