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Sealed: The Barrier

Sealed Away for over 1,000 years, The Powers of One young Man will be awakened! and With his Half Human Partner they will Defy Gravity and The rest of their worlds. They will save the souls of Thousands Because their destiny's are... Sealed

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 0 - The Beggining
Submitted: September 1, 2007 • Updated: September 3, 2007
Word count: 522 • Size: 2k • Comments: 42 • views: 337

Chapter 1 - The Barrier: Our first Episode!!!
Submitted: September 3, 2007 • Updated: September 9, 2007
Word count: 2327 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 281

Chapter 2 - Fly or Die
Submitted: September 22, 2007 • Updated: September 22, 2007
Word count: 852 • Size: 4k • Comments: 7 • views: 255

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FallOutGirlAARHinder on September 22, 2007, 8:09:51 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderO_O I PROMISE U LEO!!!!!!!!!!!!! U WONT DIE!!!!!!!! NOT ON MY WATCH!!!!!!!!!! AND ILL KILL THAT OLD COOT FOR TRYING TO KILL U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


weird though ur the Blue Healer.... whos the Red Healer and that other healer

unless theres more!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on January 16, 2008, 7:32:16 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThere is, Blue Healr, Red Healer and Green Healer, Each died from their own personal weakness...

Blue- Love
Red- Lust
Green- Envy/Power

sharp-fang on October 31, 2007, 8:00:20 AM

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sharp-fangCan I be a Werewolf?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on November 11, 2007, 4:36:46 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskyeah but you wouldn't necessarily be a werewolf

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 13, 2007, 2:20:46 PM

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SasukesgirlfriendYou pick. I don't care leo....as long as i get an and bat pet I'm okay*nods*.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 14, 2007, 11:05:58 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskOKay Vampire lass! lol

I only created the other info in case you wanted to go with Fallourgirlaaahinder's idea =D lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 11:21:59 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskName: D.K
Clan: Karth
Your Family's Clan Ability: The Ability to control Water and all the Sub Elements under it...
Hair Color: Brunette with snow white strips
Eye Color: Blue(normal) White(Angery)
Cloths: Ripped white dress no shoes - bare foot
Appearence: Pale White Skin, Scary looking. Has Very Light Blue Marks on her hands and feet
Main Technique Used In Battle: Aqua Lust
What does it do?: It Takes all the Liquid in the Victims body and Yanks it out with full force, leaving the victim turned to dust...
Pet?: Coco, a White Wolf
Weapon: *Try to Be Unique* Ax of A Cold Heart
Attacks For weapon: White Hatered and Ocean of Death
What does it do?: White Hatred - White Dry Ice comes out and it Paralizes the victim, And Eventually Turns their heart into dry ice, and they Soon enough die Ocean of Death - The Undead killed by her ax come to attack the victim. The Undead are basically Liquid, there is no way to kill them
Other Info: She fell in love with a Mortal. He then stole her ax and trust. She killed him and she is disgusted by humans. But in the story if she goes in with a group she's trusts she sets aside her hatred.


This is what your info might look like if she had The Powers Of water and Ice *Only Ice becuz it's Under the influence of water*

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 6, 2007, 11:31:42 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 11:44:52 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol *Sigh* U didn't read my other comments did you? any ways, Avea wanted to know if you wanted to control water and Ice, so I put that up now... Which Powers do you want lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 6, 2007, 10:17:03 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendName: D.K. (Darer.Kick)
Clan: Vampire
Your Family's Clan Ability: Turn humans into vampires
Hair Color: Brunette with snow white strips
Eye Color: Blue(normal) Red(blood hungry)
Cloths: Ripped white dress with a bottle attached to chain (in case she's blood thirsty - its like a substitution), no shoes - bare foot
Appearence: Scary looking black marks that are on her back (takes shape of demotic eye)
Main Technique Used In Battle: Vampire's Moon
What does it do?: It summons A Harvest Moon and gains an hour of purely evil power
Pet?: Coco, a black bat
Weapon: *Try to Be Unique* Ax of Evil Heart
Attacks For weapon: Black Hatred and Ocean of Death
What does it do?: Black Hatred - Gives them black lighting paralyzing the victim Ocean of Death - The Undead killed by her ax come to attack the victim
Other Info: She fell in love with a human. He then stole her ax and trust. She killed him and she is disgusted by humans. But in the story if she goes in with a group she's trusts she sets aside her hatred.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 10:36:35 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYAY!!! lol I love the Info!! and it all fits!!! lol

Here are some more That you will Have just to make you stronger... You Choose which ones you like and dislike

Abilities: Deadly Screech- Your Victim is Hunted by all of the screams of the People you have killed and the People they have Killed, They Usually Pass out from the Attack but Some times, The Trances are so intense They die...
Sonic Death Wave- A Red or Black Ripple of waves come out of your mouth. Taking damage to this attack usually results in sufire damage to your internal Organs.
Red Eye Trance- You Eyes Glow Bright red as your Opponent is hypnotised into what you tell them to do

Weapon: A Wip called the Cheekisota *Pronounced Chee-Key-So-ta*

Attacks with Weapon: Cheekiso- It Lashes On the Ground as a Dark wave of Energy is released from the Wip.
Tasiki *Tay-See-Key*- The Wip Tightens around the victim and Squeezes them on your command

There ya go =D hope you like them

Weaknesses:

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 6, 2007, 10:55:47 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendI like all the those. But I want my ax Leo. I WANT MY AX! lol

Ax please. *goes in corner* AX ax ax ax

You: Okay I'll give you your ax ^^'!

Me: THANK YOU ^^ *hugs*

You*thinking* She's acting very weird today -.e...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 11:07:10 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol!!! You get an Ax and a Wip


Ohh and FalloutgirlAARHinder *Avea* Wants to know if instead of being a Vampire personif you wanted to controll water =D

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 6, 2007, 11:24:08 AM

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Sasukesgirlfriend*puts serious personality on* I really want to be a vampire but if she wants it's okay but I want to be vampire. *goes on knees while bowing* I'm sorry but can I please be a vampire?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 11:08:12 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskand Ice =D

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 6, 2007, 11:04:54 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendI WANT MY AX LEO!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 10:42:59 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskWeakness: You can't be around a mirror or you will be trapped in it =D lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 6, 2007, 10:57:51 AM

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Sasukesgirlfriend*changes topic*
Chest Tattoo.*smirk* *snicker*snicker*

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 11:08:35 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol Your funny, Now read my comment above =D

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 6, 2007, 11:21:44 AM

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Sasukesgirlfriend*puppy eyes* But I was aiming for smart a**. *cries*

You: Fine smart a**. Happy?

Me: YES -^^-!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 11:23:39 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskRead the comment at the very top... I hope you read the other comments. FallOutGirlAARHinder wants to know if you wana be ICe and water =D

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 6, 2007, 9:48:11 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendNO LEO! *bumps into a tree*

Sailor Moon: Now you know how it feels!

Me: That doesn't hurt. You just don't think about anything and you feel no pain or felt what type of surface it was.

You: 0_e...

WHAT'S THE INFO YA NEED FOR ME FOR THIS STORY-OH!

You: Story-oh?

Me: Shut up!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 10:12:05 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskI hope it doesn't take you half as long as it took me to write what you needed as it does for you to fill it out lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 10:18:06 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masktheres...

Fire
Smoke
Air
mist
water
Ice
earth
lava


And then there are other powers like...

Shapeshifting
moving things with mind
talking to animals
teleporting

lol and alot more things, I just hope you choose a cool power

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 6, 2007, 10:23:34 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendI didn't add the power part but I would choose...Ice or fire. You choose I don't care.

You want:
a)Ice for D.K.
or
b)Fire for D.K.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 10:42:16 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol I kinda just gave you some stuff to make you stronger, but if you want those powers then fine, But make up your mind lol. If you want to be a vampire with Vampire powers then Cool or if you wana be a Ice Queen then thats cool too =D. JUST PIC ONE lol

Ohh and BTW You won't be considered a Vampire but... Well I they're called what ever your characters last name is *And try not to make it an earth name =D except for the first lol*

I added that comment be4 I saw your INfo

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 6, 2007, 10:25:18 AM

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Sasukesgirlfriendalso talking to animals please -3-, nothing much I'm asking for. LOOK AT THE COMMENT ABOVE LEO!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 10:10:09 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskI wonder what you'll choose for your power... Lol there are so many to choose from lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 10:01:47 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masktic toc tic toc... lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 9:56:11 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol sorry I was writing it out along with the exaimples lol So hurry up and fill it out... Oh and Thanks for all the comments! lol *You bumped into a tree lol*

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 6, 2007, 9:39:10 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendI see -.-*puts on professor outfit* The story is cool by non the least.*nods*

What info ya need from me?

(I WILL READ THE OTHER CHAPTERS IN A MINUTE)

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on October 6, 2007, 9:53:57 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask+D YAY!!! I love it when your in my stories =D


Here's what you'l need to fill out for me...

Name:
Clan:
Your Family's Clan Ability:
Hair Color:
Eye Color:
Cloths:
Appearence:
Main Technique Used In Battle:
What does it do?:
Pet?:
Weapon: *Try to Be Unique*
Attacks For weapon:
What does it do?:
Other Info:


Here is an Example For you...


Name: Frest *Pronounced Free-S-t*
Clan: Shep *Pronounced Sh-ep*
Your Family's Clan Ability: The Ability To Turn People Into Trees
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Green
Cloths: Brown Short Sleved Shirt with Tan Pants...
Appearence: Has Green Markings On his Pawns Surrounded by Bown Markings. Same Markings are mimiced On His Back,Chest, and Face
Main Technique Used In Battle: Bark Bite
What does it do: When he bites People they turn into a tree
Pet?: A Giant Termite Named Terrmy, That Eats The People who Are turned into Trees
Weapon: *Try to Be Unique* A Laso That When Someone is trapped in it's ring, they will turn into a flower
Attacks For weapon: Flower Power
What does it do?: Squeezes Person in the Ring and Makes them Explode into Flowers
Other Info: Hes Afraid of hights

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 6, 2007, 9:43:08 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendInteresting.*nods*

You: Stop with the smart get-up -3-.

Me: You're right...I'm dumb...but being dumb is so fun.>3

You: 0-e...

Me: AND BEING WEIRD TOO IS SO FUN! YOU SHOULD TRY IT SOME TIME!

You: 0_0

FallOutGirlAARHinder on September 9, 2007, 7:45:14 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderWORDS CANT EVEN DESCRIBE THIS WONDERFUL CHAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!


great chappy!!^^

though i wont be able to talk because i got school stuff to do (AR) and then church

so bu bi

ADD ANOTHER CHAPPY!!!!!!!!!!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on September 3, 2007, 7:37:14 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

im not shocked u've hit on before

lots of ppl have

and ive turned them down except one

Anothny.... though after we kissed he told me the next day that my lips taste and feel like my BFFL Nicky's

man i shouldve dumped there


but i love this chappy!!!!!!^^ do i go to ur school or somthin as a transfer student

yet as soon as i got on u added that chappy^^ so i was *getting to excited* AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^


CHUNKY MONKEY BAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 5, 2007, 1:34:00 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskAW! thatnks! lol thats funny!!! lol I'll try and finsih up the chappy saturday -.- lol WORK and School...I'm having alot of work and very little play *Freetime lol*, but I do think work is fun but i'm never abel to finish this dang chappy that i can't stop thinking about lol... well see ya saturday, if not sooner =D *Hopefully*

FallOutGirlAARHinder on September 3, 2007, 3:50:39 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderClan/Family name: La-Lover-destin (my name is what ever u want it to be. but somthin good)
Power: Wind and Sea
Characteristics: Everybody either had blonde or turquise hair, teal or amber eyes, their either a angel ,mermaid(merfolk), or neko(cat and human). also we have gold and turquise/royal blue markings going all over our face and torse(front and back)
Technics Used in family: Hurrdle, glare, rip tide, bust
Branch/Side Powers: what??? if u mean my powers than i have both wind and sea and im neko. I also use Tornado and tsunami

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 3, 2007, 3:58:49 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskoh and BTW the reason your Half *Earth* human is so I have a reason for you being on earth the day You were kidnapped =D

FallOutGirlAARHinder on September 3, 2007, 4:04:04 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHindergreat im kidnapped!!!

i dont being kidnapped

its always fun when im kidnapped in stories

like Daphne in Scooby Doo ^^

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 3, 2007, 4:27:33 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskThats good, lol just wait til you see the next chapy O.O

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 3, 2007, 3:57:09 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLOL, Thats really close to the thing I gave you on your profile just now. Lol but you still have to fill out it out.

And What I filled out for her was an example of a Family/Clan Profile not A Person profile lol *SRRY 'bout that*

FallOutGirlAARHinder on September 3, 2007, 4:01:44 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderOH!!!!!!!!

sharp-fang on September 2, 2007, 12:25:49 PM

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sharp-fangAwwwwsoome!=D
Great job!Is there Wereolves in it?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 2, 2007, 1:26:22 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol basically every Family has an ability! and when 2 bloodlines mix, the abilities are either combined or one takes over the other...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 2, 2007, 1:26:21 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskLol basically every Family has an ability! and when 2 bloodlines mix, the abilities are either combined or one takes over the other...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 2, 2007, 1:19:25 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskyeah lol, all sorts of Werethings lol, You see, Bloodline of a family has a Power and a few branch powers.. Example...

Clan/Family name: Torchit
Power: Fire
Characteristics: Everyone has Blonde or red Hair with bright red markings down there back,Arms,and Legs.
Technics Used in family: Combust, Nova, and Flame Sting
Branch/Side Powers: Smoke and Heat

See what I meen??? lol if you don't get it tell me =D

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on September 2, 2007, 1:21:47 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskO, I didn't meen Power, I ment "ability", Lol Power doesn't really work in this story lol

sharp-fang on September 2, 2007, 12:26:22 PM

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sharp-fangI mean Werewolves?lol