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First Snow Whitness

A poem I won honerable minchin 4

Chapters

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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: May 19, 2005 • Updated: May 19, 2005
Word count: 91 • Size: <1k • Comments: 9 • views: 213

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sorafan_cupcake on June 25, 2005, 3:24:00 PM

sorafan_cupcake on (Chapter: 1)
sorafan_cupcakeya it not retarted at all!!! me and my friend thought it was pretty neat!

RiversBlood on June 2, 2005, 6:17:10 AM

RiversBlood on (Chapter: 1)
RiversBloodThis is pretty good. Keep working and I'm sure you'll make even better poems in the near future! Surf the net for poetry and get other people to critique it. This is really good, I like it!

xoxoAMERICANIDIOTxoxo on May 29, 2005, 7:25:53 AM

xoxoAMERICANIDIOTxoxo on (Chapter: 1)
xoxoAMERICANIDIOTxoxothis story is awesome
uhhh ^>^ or @.@

UNITED_WE_SUCK on May 29, 2005, 7:23:57 AM

UNITED_WE_SUCK on (Chapter: 1)
UNITED_WE_SUCKCailin!!

heartless-sinner on May 22, 2005, 3:52:53 AM

heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 1)
heartless-sinnerit is really awesome!! ^-^

cresentmoonsL-Z on May 21, 2005, 6:17:12 AM

cresentmoonsL-Z on (Chapter: 1)
cresentmoonsL-Zthis poem's kewl,lol ^_____^

weewoo on May 20, 2005, 7:21:48 AM

weewoo on (Chapter: 1)
weewoonaa!! it's not retarded!! it's better than my pomes on this site!

UNITED_WE_SUCK on May 19, 2005, 1:25:39 PM

UNITED_WE_SUCK on (Chapter: 1)
UNITED_WE_SUCKYou really Think I thought It was RetArded

love_2_write_stuff on May 19, 2005, 12:33:47 PM

love_2_write_stuff on (Chapter: 1)
love_2_write_stuffI like! Very creative! *claps*
chya! ^-^