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Looking at roses.

This was submitted into a poetry competition, and will be published in a book soon. I can't remeber what the books name was, but it was on Poetry.com. Anyway, i hope you enjoy!
Please post comments, or ideas on how i can make it better.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Looking at roses.
Submitted: May 3, 2005 • Updated: May 3, 2005
Word count: 87 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 170

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Dragga_Ryuu on November 20, 2005, 9:51:22 PM

Dragga_Ryuu on (Chapter: 1)
Dragga_RyuuThis is really good. Congrats on the publication, by the way. And it seems perfect to me. I need to fix my two.

Randomobssesedeasilyentertaine on June 11, 2005, 2:26:59 PM

Randomobssesedeasilyentertaine on (Chapter: 1)
Randomobssesedeasilyentertainewow.....that like was all *sniffle* sad and clse to my heart
PLEASE DONT CRY!
good job
i loved it
now when i see a rose ill think of this poem
=ww=

WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on May 27, 2005, 8:10:18 AM

WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on (Chapter: 1)
WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2i know i posted three times, but ignore that last comment please. I think i was drinking fizzy drink then.

WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on May 8, 2005, 4:13:37 PM

WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on (Chapter: 1)
WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2aw, is this poem that bad????? MY MORALE CANNOT COPE WITH THIS!!!! *hits head against wall*
(oh, and thanks Beck-ee for commenting. and anyone else who chooses to)

WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on May 3, 2005, 6:23:33 PM

WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on (Chapter: 1)
WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2i'm pleased you like it! thanx.

bek-ee on May 3, 2005, 4:55:49 PM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 1)
bek-eeT.T so sad. i love it! keep writing!