Chapter 1 - Red
Submitted November 3, 2007 Updated February 26, 2008 Status Incomplete | Ok so... these are the only poems I can write lol and J.T. (bookworm369) suggested I post them so... here goes. Worth a shot, hope you like them ^^ (PS: I need more colors. Someone give me a suggestion please lol)
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Chapter 1 - Red
Chapter 1 - Red
RED
Fiery passion
A velvet rose
Threatening and dangerous
Protective barrier
The color of anger
Wounds that won’t heal
Hurts that don’t end
Dragons and Fire Imps
Love and Hate
The color of contradiction
Fiery passion
A velvet rose
Threatening and dangerous
Protective barrier
The color of anger
Wounds that won’t heal
Hurts that don’t end
Dragons and Fire Imps
Love and Hate
The color of contradiction
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YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 2:24:26 AM
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I love it..... just awesome. O_O *In awe*YoriXYamiForever on November 11, 2007, 3:21:04 AM
Thanks Reshea-chan! *glomps you*KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:53:02 AM
*blinks* I hate you so bad, you know that? So bad.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:03:14 AM
You know... that's why I was afraid to post these. *frowns at you* Whatever happened to constructive criticism?KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:06:21 AM
I HATE YOU BECAUSE YOU CAN ACTUALLY WRITE POEMS!! DUH!!!! I can't use correct constructive critism. It doesn't work.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:07:31 AM
*laughs* I'm sure you can write poems too. I didn't think I could until I tried... even now these are all I can do ^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:08:53 AM
Psh, yeah right.Blackwolfmoon on November 3, 2007, 11:06:00 AM
this are very nice ^^bookworm369 on November 3, 2007, 11:05:33 AM
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i love it! great job!^^