Chapter 6 - White

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November 3, 2007
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Ok so... these are the only poems I can write lol and J.T. (bookworm369) suggested I post them so... here goes. Worth a shot, hope you like them ^^

(PS: I need more colors. Someone give me a suggestion please lol)

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Chapter 6 - White

WHITE

The color of a new beginning
The slate wiped clean
Fluffy clouds hanging in the sky
Caps of waves as they travel the sea
The color of new fallen snow
The lie hidden in your conscience
Pure, simple, clean
Living in peace and harmony

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YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 2:28:31 AM

Snow, I love snow, almost killed me once but I still love it ^^

YoriXYamiForever on November 11, 2007, 3:19:43 AM

*kills snow for trying to kill Jenny*

bookworm369 on November 6, 2007, 12:27:02 PM

i love it...the only thing i would change is the word "fluffy", but thats just me XD seriously tho awesome job!^^

KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:55:41 AM

I like the end, but not the snow part. Hate the snow part.

YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 7:57:39 AM

Why? I thought it was nice symbolism if you think about the other things I said about white...

KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:01:22 AM

Yes, it's nice symbolism... BUT I HATE SNOW!!!

YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:04:53 AM

*tsks at you* *reminds you* Constructive criticism...

KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:06:45 AM

I FREAKIN' HATE SNOW!! SO LAY OFF!!

YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:08:01 AM

As you wish...

KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:08:28 AM

>.<

AnimeAngel87 on November 3, 2007, 11:53:11 AM

There is White See

Just so

[ color = white]

w/o the spaces

YoriXYamiForever on November 3, 2007, 11:54:50 AM

Thanks! ^^

AnimeAngel87 on November 7, 2007, 8:48:37 PM

^_^ yw