Chapter 8 - Brown
Submitted November 3, 2007 Updated February 26, 2008 Status Incomplete | Ok so... these are the only poems I can write lol and J.T. (bookworm369) suggested I post them so... here goes. Worth a shot, hope you like them ^^ (PS: I need more colors. Someone give me a suggestion please lol)
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Chapter 8 - Brown
Chapter 8 - Brown
BROWN
The taste of hot chocolate
On a cold winter night
The warmth of an embrace
Welcoming and gentle
Simple and comforting
The feel of the Earth
(I personally like the color brown ^^ this was a challenge from a friend who thought there was nothing good to say about it so... What do you have to say now? mwah ha ha ha)
The taste of hot chocolate
On a cold winter night
The warmth of an embrace
Welcoming and gentle
Simple and comforting
The feel of the Earth
(I personally like the color brown ^^ this was a challenge from a friend who thought there was nothing good to say about it so... What do you have to say now? mwah ha ha ha)
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YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 2:30:01 AM
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Your making me cry...;_;YoriXYamiForever on November 11, 2007, 3:19:23 AM
I'm glad you like them Reshea but don't cry!!!! *hugs you*bookworm369 on November 10, 2007, 10:21:44 AM
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XP darn it....i was sure u couldnt do it, but YOU PROVED ME WRONG! lol excellent job!YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 10:22:56 AM
I have proved you all wrong, mwah ha ha ha ha!Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! ^^
KelekiahGaladrian on November 10, 2007, 9:53:17 AM
OOH! I LIKE!!! GREAT JOB YORI-CHAN! That one's great! I don't really have much else to say now....YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 9:54:10 AM
lol THanks Kel-chan! ^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 10, 2007, 10:16:14 AM
YOU'RE WELCOME!