My brother, a not so clever killer

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Author
Yoshi4EverAfter

Submitted
May 23, 2011
Updated
May 24, 2011
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 1k
Words: 365
Comments: 3
Views: 1,568
Faves...: 0
Rating: 1

A stoory I maade... (please tell me if I spell wrong)

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Chapter 1 - Soon, the story will begin
Submitted: May 23, 2011 • Updated: May 24, 2011
Word count: 365 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 335

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nedj77 on May 24, 2011, 1:18:55 AM

nedj77 on May 24, 2011, 1:18:55 AM (Chapter: 1)

Busness, and when you have a chance to fix this, Pau is the first Paul you did, other then that, pritty good!

Yoshi4EverAfter on May 24, 2011, 3:10:16 PM

Yoshi4EverAfter on May 24, 2011, 3:10:16 PM (Chapter: 1)

Thank you, I've fixed it now.

nedj77 on June 25, 2012, 3:20:01 AM

nedj77 on June 25, 2012, 3:20:01 AM (Chapter: 1)

i think i misspelled business, whoops. :I