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My brother, a not so clever killer

A stoory I maade... (please tell me if I spell wrong)



Chapter 1 - Soon, the story will begin
Submitted: May 23, 2011 • Updated: May 24, 2011
Word count: 365 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 267


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nedj77 on May 24, 2011, 1:18:55 AM

nedj77 on (Chapter: 1)
nedj77Busness, and when you have a chance to fix this, Pau is the first Paul you did, other then that, pritty good!

Yoshi4EverAfter on May 24, 2011, 3:10:16 PM

Yoshi4EverAfter on (Chapter: 1)
Yoshi4EverAfterThank you, I've fixed it now.

nedj77 on June 25, 2012, 3:20:01 AM

nedj77 on (Chapter: 1)
nedj77i think i misspelled business, whoops. :I