Chapter 1 - Stuck in a place without Time
Submitted March 11, 2012 Updated March 11, 2012 Status Complete | This is a song. It's not about toasters. The first verse and chorus is sung by someone, the other verse and chorus is sung by someone else, the third verse is sung by the first person and the last chorus is sung by both. Critique is much appreciated!
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Chapter 1 - Stuck in a place without Time
Chapter 1 - Stuck in a place without Time
It was a long time ago
But I remember it well
You were taken by a man whose face I couldn't quite see
Because the night was dark and so was his cape
As I ran after you he opened a path to a different dimension
By tapping his rod three times in the ground
The portal sucked me up like a bathtub emptying
There was no way I could escape
I was stuck in a place without time for so long
My body hasn't aged nor has my mind
It's just the years that have passed by
Would you recognize me?
Would you remember me?
Do you still love me?
It was a long time ago
But I remember it well
I was taken by a man whose face I couldn't quite see
Because the night was dark and so was his cape
He locked me in a tower away from society and you, my dear love
I missed you so much I couldn't bear it
So I sneaked out the window and took his rod when he slept
I tapped it in the ground three times
I was stuck in a place without time for so long
My body hasn't aged nor has my mind
It's just the years that have passed by
Would you recognize me?
Would you remember me?
Do you still love me?
The dimension wasn't big
But I couldn't see the edge
There was so many people inside it searching for a way out
Little girls, little boys searching for mommy
There was no exit, once you came you stayed. But I heard a rumour that you had come
I ran for as long as my legs bear me
I can imagine I searched for several years
But everything was worth it 'cause...
I just found you
We are stuck in a place without time forever more
Our body's haven't aged nor have our minds
It's just the years that have passed by
I recognize you
I remember you
I still love you
I still love you
But I remember it well
You were taken by a man whose face I couldn't quite see
Because the night was dark and so was his cape
As I ran after you he opened a path to a different dimension
By tapping his rod three times in the ground
The portal sucked me up like a bathtub emptying
There was no way I could escape
I was stuck in a place without time for so long
My body hasn't aged nor has my mind
It's just the years that have passed by
Would you recognize me?
Would you remember me?
Do you still love me?
It was a long time ago
But I remember it well
I was taken by a man whose face I couldn't quite see
Because the night was dark and so was his cape
He locked me in a tower away from society and you, my dear love
I missed you so much I couldn't bear it
So I sneaked out the window and took his rod when he slept
I tapped it in the ground three times
I was stuck in a place without time for so long
My body hasn't aged nor has my mind
It's just the years that have passed by
Would you recognize me?
Would you remember me?
Do you still love me?
The dimension wasn't big
But I couldn't see the edge
There was so many people inside it searching for a way out
Little girls, little boys searching for mommy
There was no exit, once you came you stayed. But I heard a rumour that you had come
I ran for as long as my legs bear me
I can imagine I searched for several years
But everything was worth it 'cause...
I just found you
We are stuck in a place without time forever more
Our body's haven't aged nor have our minds
It's just the years that have passed by
I recognize you
I remember you
I still love you
I still love you
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nedj77 on March 20, 2012, 8:32:45 AM
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Yoshi4EverAfter on March 20, 2012, 4:25:32 PM
Thanks! c: I guess it would be fun to sing it with someone, but I haven't even added music yet. ^^ Oh, and thank you for the fave! <3
nedj77 on March 23, 2012, 6:15:29 AM
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no prob._ren_tao_fan_ on March 11, 2012, 12:14:39 AM
:)I like this. I bet it would sound really cool put into musical form.
Yoshi4EverAfter on March 11, 2012, 6:21:33 AM
Aw, thank you Shelley! c: I don't really have time to think about adding music now, but I'll definitely come around it at some point. :)
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