Stuck in a place without Time
Submitted March 11, 2012 Updated March 11, 2012 Status Complete | This is a song. It's not about toasters. The first verse and chorus is sung by someone, the other verse and chorus is sung by someone else, the third verse is sung by the first person and the last chorus is sung by both. Critique is much appreciated!
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Chapter 1 - Stuck in a place without Time
Submitted: March 11, 2012 • Updated: March 11, 2012
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nedj77 on March 20, 2012, 8:32:45 AM
nedj77 on (Chapter: 1)
Yoshi4EverAfter on March 20, 2012, 4:25:32 PM
Yoshi4EverAfter on (Chapter: 1)
Thanks! c: I guess it would be fun to sing it with someone, but I haven't even added music yet. ^^ Oh, and thank you for the fave! <3
nedj77 on March 23, 2012, 6:15:29 AM
nedj77 on (Chapter: index)
no prob._ren_tao_fan_ on March 11, 2012, 12:14:39 AM
_ren_tao_fan_ on (Chapter: 1)
:)I like this. I bet it would sound really cool put into musical form.
Yoshi4EverAfter on March 11, 2012, 6:21:33 AM
Yoshi4EverAfter on (Chapter: 1)
Aw, thank you Shelley! c: I don't really have time to think about adding music now, but I'll definitely come around it at some point. :)
:)
CCCUUUUTTTTTEEEEEEE!!!!!!!