Chapter 2 - Chapter 1: Mistyfoot's Patrol
Submitted July 30, 2007 Updated July 30, 2007 Status Incomplete | The main char of this fanfic is a dark brown tabby named Hawkstorm, who has one green eye, one blue eye, and a father named Hawkfrost. She is the daughter of Leopardstar as well.
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Chapter 2 - Chapter 1: Mistyfoot's Patrol
Chapter 2 - Chapter 1: Mistyfoot's Patrol
Chapter 1: Mistyfoot's Patrol
Reedwhisker, Pouncepaw and Mistyfoot made up the patrol that left the camp that morning. They headed toward Twolegplace, where Twolegs stayed every greenleaf and let their kits play in the lake. Pouncepaw had a wierd feeling this morning, but couldn't tell where it came from. It heightened when a strange smell drifted up his nostrils.
"Dogs!" Mistyfoot hissed.
"What are they doing here?" Reedwhisker growled. "So far away from their Twolegs?"
"They don't smell like Twolegs," Pouncepaw meowed.
~To be continued-this isn't the end of the chapter, folks!~
Reedwhisker, Pouncepaw and Mistyfoot made up the patrol that left the camp that morning. They headed toward Twolegplace, where Twolegs stayed every greenleaf and let their kits play in the lake. Pouncepaw had a wierd feeling this morning, but couldn't tell where it came from. It heightened when a strange smell drifted up his nostrils.
"Dogs!" Mistyfoot hissed.
"What are they doing here?" Reedwhisker growled. "So far away from their Twolegs?"
"They don't smell like Twolegs," Pouncepaw meowed.
~To be continued-this isn't the end of the chapter, folks!~
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mew101 on May 16, 2008, 10:26:05 PM
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i have read all of the books!!!aeris7dragon on May 17, 2008, 12:24:43 AM
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Aww man - I still need to read warriors return and outcast!!!!!!! (Is cats of the clans out yet? I haven't read that either...)Kupo on July 31, 2007, 2:14:33 PM
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hmm... sorry but I think I'll hold off reading this until I've read the book(s?) it's based off of.aeris7dragon on April 18, 2008, 9:42:39 AM
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Okay!!! Well, there more than one book...actually, there's more than one series. (The original, the New Prophecy, Power of Three, and there's also Secrets of the Clans and Firestar's Quest. The last two are single books.)aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 2:08:54 AM
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ok. its called Warriors by Erin Hunter (who is actually three people!!! check out warriorcats.com if u dont believe me) and their covers are always beautiful!!!!!Kupo on August 1, 2007, 4:00:14 AM
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coolie.aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 5:12:41 AM
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btw, it is a series.homestarrunner097 on July 31, 2007, 1:36:07 AM
It's really good so far,but do you think you could make your chappies a little longer?aeris7dragon on July 31, 2007, 1:52:21 AM
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everyone thinking jeypaws useless-well he'll show tehm!!!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!aeris7dragon on July 31, 2007, 1:51:40 AM
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ya dat was always my prob-could never get teh chappys very long. Ill try harder tho!!! really really hard. im almost finished with the sight!!!!! but i thought lionpaw and hollypaw were supposed to have powers too....not just jaypaw! i feel sorry for jaypaw, only dont tell him i said that!luckylace222 on July 30, 2007, 4:46:30 AM
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xD THIS STARTED SO COOL!!!!!! The names are so interesting!!! I like this!aeris7dragon on July 30, 2007, 4:54:00 AM
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well u should read the actual book-im not talking about fanfic! its called Warriors and its by Erin Hunter. their covers are always beautiful! (my fave is Sunset!)homestarrunner097 on July 30, 2007, 10:27:30 AM
I read the books.aeris7dragon on July 30, 2007, 10:30:02 AM
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Yay!!!! Books!!!! (sorry about the randomness)