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Chapter 1 - Broken Heart

What i see at my school all the time and this is how i feel...lets just say i'm pissed as i have ever been...

Chapter 1 - Broken Heart

Chapter 1 - Broken Heart
Broken Heart

All I want is a red, red rose to put in my empty vase.
To hold your hand forever and all eternity.
Held by your words and kisses.
Your arms holding me so.
The strongest three words, “I love you.”
Cute little anonymous notes and cards in my locker, yet I know who they’re from.
A beautiful chain that would wrap around my neck and rest against my breast, where my beating heart always lay.
Your caring words, your gentle touches.
Warm breath against my cheek and neck,
Your warm body against mine.
Your beautiful features, your loving personality.
Oh, how I love you.
If you were ever there.
I still long for a red, red rose, my vase empty and sorrowful.
My hand grips only air, your hand nowhere in sight.
Your words and kisses spoken to a different girl.
Your arms holding her instead of me, speaking those three words for her ears only. Her response, “I love you too.”
Notes and cards, anonymous, appear in her locker and in her hands, for her eyes only. She knows who they’re from, and so do I.
My chain I so badly want, with its little heart draped over her breast against her loved heart.
Your caring words and gentle touches only hers.
Your warm breathes against her cheek when you talk to her, your breath against her neck when you dance together.
Your warmth against hers when it’s cold.
Oh, how I would love you.
But, you’re not mine.
Yet, I will always long for those things, along with my broken heart.

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Dragon_Lord on June 21, 2004, 7:16:01 AM

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Dragon_Lorda little something i threw together inspired by the moment, i love ur poem, it got to me, so i wrote this for u, u may use it however u want, add onto it if u want.

Dragon_Lord on June 21, 2004, 7:15:00 AM

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Dragon_Lordi wish that i could find someone to love, 16 years of lonelyness has pried into my hearts and ripped it asunder. A voice to hold on too and long for i shale never find.

~Wolves Desire~
dragon_lord

FireTempest666 on April 6, 2004, 9:28:07 AM

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FireTempest666hm... that gives me an idea.. :P

baby-kitty on November 27, 2003, 4:37:44 AM

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baby-kittylollipops make things all better sure!

Inasho_the_three_tailed_fox on November 27, 2003, 12:35:52 AM

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Inasho_the_three_tailed_foxi like this story. it's so emotinalthat it almost made me cry. i know how you feel...wanna lollipop?

baby-kitty on November 13, 2003, 1:47:49 AM

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baby-kittyi'm better now