demon army

Chapter 1 - The start of a war.
Submitted: March 17, 2009 • Updated: March 22, 2013
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Chapter 2 - Home
Submitted: March 18, 2009 • Updated: March 22, 2013
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Chapter 3 - The end
Submitted: March 22, 2013 • Updated: March 22, 2013
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LordessAnnara14 on March 27, 2009, 4:48:03 AM

LordessAnnara14 on March 27, 2009, 4:48:03 AM (Chapter: 2)

spelling corrections...once again;
cued - Could
men - man
NICE THO!!!

XD

LordessAnnara14 on March 17, 2009, 3:41:27 AM

LordessAnnara14 on March 17, 2009, 3:41:27 AM (Chapter: 1)

wow Ty. that really amazed me how well (yet bad) you can write.
spelling corrections;
shod - Should
rand - Rained
and a HELLA lot of punctuals missing!
but other than that, well done! *clap clap*

NaotaNoir on March 17, 2009, 2:59:29 AM

NaotaNoir on March 17, 2009, 2:59:29 AM (Chapter: 1)

Awesome! XD